All Comments on 'Good Neighbor Ch. 02'

You had a great story going. Went off the rails about halfway through this chapter. Why go from a good story with tons of potential and do a lame "Bill" collector . Besides they can't collect on him because he didn't purchase anything from them. Let them take him to court Hopefully you will recant this somehow and get back on track.

You actually think these guys - who seem to have fewer business ethics than a Mafia loanshark - are gonna bother to comply with a court order, when they can just change their names and fade away?

You think this jerk - who whether he MEANT to be or not - is engaged in a particularly heinous form of sex trafficking is gonna go to court?

And you think that they'd LET him go to court? Ten seconds after they get wind of it, all the girls will be brainless fuck-toy bimbos on their way to a Tijuana {or modern-day equivalent location} whorehouse, and HE'S gonna be living in the ocean trying to fuck tuna.

Bills purpose here is to add some conflict without the whole government agency or secret society stuff these stories often devolve to. It's a little whimsical compared to many of the darker directions a lot of these stories go, but I had fun with be it.

Kind of annoyed about the breast expansion tbh. When you have a harem of 8 women do ALL of them really need to have massive breasts? Christ, some people like proportionate or small breasts too man.

Hey, my stores, my fantasy. Actually, it is more about transformation than just oversized mammary glands.

Love your stories on literotica.

My particular interests in the story are the harem, big breasts, happy women, great powerful orgasms of women, erotic enthousiastic women.

Of course, as the candyman you decide wich candy you sell

I'm interested in the next storyline you're going to publish/post.

(sorry for bad english)

Friendly greeting

And the first two things they do is make him a target for a cabal pf murderous mad scientists