All Comments on 'Good To Be Home'

I can only imagine that he had a great summer and mom eventually let him sleep in bed with her at night.

Erotic and very good.

Thanks

An erotic story at last! Great story, nice, hot and erotic, more please.

Sis coming home could be interesting........

Good story, I enjoyed it!

5 stars for the story even if not the most original plot line. Sister coming will make for an interesting conflict... two's company, three's a sandwich. Thanks for the story and the naughty thoughts it inspired.

The author loves the teasing more than the actual sex. Can't believe that they went from shower blowjob, to sandwiches for lunch, to the next morning! Nothing happened that afternoon or evening? The bulidup was good but in my opinion, went on too long and then a rather short climax.

WOW for your first submission I have to encourage you to continue, both with this great story as well as new stories.

Well done. <:o)

Cheers for the kind comments! This is the first story I've written in about 7 years (since highschool) so I'm might be a little rusty. Sorry if it's not quite to some people's tastes, I felt that a slow build-up would perhaps make it a little more realistic and yes, I do like the teasing. If there's not enough action for you in this one, there's definitely room for a part 2. Keep the comments and crits coming and I'll be sure to take them on board.

Thanks for reading!

Great story. More Please!!!

That was a very good chapter.

Really wanting another, or more.

It is good to be home. It is even better to have your cock in mom's pussy!

I loved the way you describe the sex scenes and set them up. Very erotic.

Venus

Fantastic job of writing! Reading your story was easy and you painted the perfect picture. Loved the teasing between Mom and Son, but it was also teasing for the reader. What else can I say but David wasn't the only one with a boner LOL and hope to see more from you. Thanks

Sister Next? Unprotected sex with Mom and Sis?

It would be nice to see (if author decide) a small chapter (or half) with some escalation (blowjob + anal may be) or sister chapter.

I loved the way you built the whole thing up and didn't just jump into the sex part.

A very well told tale and I hope you will write more.

Check his bio---he's only in his early to mid 20s! What an amazingly and excitingly filthy mind he has for such a young man! As someone who's very much partial to son-into-mom incest stories, I'm happy to see that his mind goes in that direction also (among others). For many, many people, there's nothing hotter than reading about a boy who not only lusts for his mother's cunt---all boys do that---but succeeds in shoving his stiff young prick up that most wonderful hole in the world, the one between his own mommy's legs. For many of us, the most beautiful thing in the world is a boy blowing his hot young balls up his own birth canal.

Loved the build up and the way you described her. 5 stars

bikini and facial, mom and son. loved it all.

Great story! Kept me on the edge the whole time

YOUR STORY WAS GREAT, WHY YOU STOPPED WRITING I GUESS WE WILL NEVER KNOW. BUT WHAT A WASTE OF TALENT .YOU SHOULD TRY TO WRITE EVERYDAY.SOON IT WILL BE 2 YEARS ,SINCE YOUR LAST AND ONLY POSTING. WITH THE GREAT COMMENTS YOU HAVE GOTTEN. GET ON YOUR COMPUTER AND GET YOUR SHIT TOGETHER, WE NEED WRITERS LIKE YOU....LAROC OF AGES

What is it with some authors? Some of the very best stories on here are from people who wrote one and never came back. Now that's frustrating, because this one is so good.

To be honest,I do not believe any teenage son,has not lusted after his mom,I know I did...My mom was too me,a very sexy woman...She and my dad were always into some kind of disagreement...Dad would get mad,and leave...Manytimes I held mom,after a heated disagreement...Late one evening,after a very heated shouting match,he left..I was felling sorry for,mom,dad had a girlfriend,he thought no one knew about..Late that night,mom and I were talking,and she said dad never made love to her anymore..I held her,holding her close,as she cried..I kissed her cheek,she turned her face to me,and our kiss,bacame very deep...My dick was hard,mom could feel it..She held me close..Then standing,pulled me to my feet..We went into my room,where mom taught me the,wonders of incest...Never again did she question,my dad...He never knew we made love,every time he was gone...When he was,working,mom,was in my bedroom,at night,until an hour before dad came home...She was so tight,and wet her hard nipples,against my chest,as I fucked her,still gives me a hardon,when I think of all our,time together...ray

What a shame such great story and scope for many more chapters. What happened ? You can't just leave it you have to finish it god damn it. You owe it to your readers. For an incentive 5 stars

You have written a great story so far . What it really needs now is a more development of that great start . Does the son become his mothers lifelong lover and partner ? Does the mother become pregnant ? Does the sister come home to discover the loving couple ? Does the son become lover to mother and daughter ? Does this truly become a loving family? I await a continuation of this great story .

This is a wo derful story that should continue with the son becoming lover and partner . Another loose end is his sister , does she ignore the obvious , or does he become a permanent fixture in both of their lives ? Do either mother or daughter get pregnant or both ? You have many delightful options . I await additional wonderful chapters .

I LOVED this story. I especially enjoyed the poolside play, with him rubbing lotion on Mom. It would not have hurt my feelings at all, if he freed his cock from his speedos as he was lotioning his mother, especially since her head was turned away from him

such a great stiry . the build up was terrific. umm wen they were in the pool and in the bathroom very sexy..

I love this story! The buildup to when they actually did it with each other was so hot!

First, the comments were as good as the story.

Second, I don't know how a 20 year old with a constant hard-on could spend all the time not having sex immediately after looking at his mother in her bikini.

I know that the author was purposely holding off the sex just to make the reader waiting for it to happen. it was great. The shower scene and the breakfast scene were fantastic.

If I were that boy and seeing his mother naked; there was no way I would last for four pages before we had sex. But that's me.

The story was five stars.

For the first week their shy actions around each other begin with a slow start, they exhibit reluctance, uncertainty, modesty, distance, and personal space.

They simmer, steam, and eventually raise their sexual tension to a level of physical passion.

The next morning he doesn't even say good morning or ask about her health or feelings. He forcefully grabs her from behind and rams away till he gets his own gratification. Her presence is coincidental to his ejaculation. His actions center on himself with no regard for her pleasure.

On, Off. Up, Down. Whisper, Scream. Subtle, Blatent.

That was phuqing awesome......love the buildup and slow tease.....but even more I loved that you can spell and structure sentences ....BRAVO !!! More please......much more.....

Beautiful. I enjoyed the "slow Burn" of the story. I especially enjoyed that you did not disgrace the woman by making her a slut and a whore. Very respectful passion between a man and a woman. Very hot and thank you for not making her pregnant. Excellent. I want more.............

MORE please!

Loved it showed the love for each other and the passion they felt, but you should have continued to see how their relationship evolved gave it 5 stars !!!!!!!!!!!!

Very hot! Five stars and a favorite point!

Very tender love story between mother and son. I thoroughly enjoy such stories when the characters (mother and son) are pyschologically and emotionallymature enough to admit their sexual love for each other without guilt, shame, self-loathing, self-recrimination or self-doubt. Love does not hurt anyone, Only people hurt people. 5 star story. Wish the author had made the story into a series.