All Comments on 'Gotcha Ch. 08'

I love how you had Wendy defend Jen's honor...this story is getting better and better!

I am thrilled at the way this story is shaping up. Thanks for posting the chapters in a timely fashion. Also, I am thoroughly enjoying your Step-by-Step series.

This is shaping up to be one of the best stories on Literotica. i have enjoyed every chapter so far, so here's hoping the story continues in a similar vein.

My comments in that last chapter were unfair and I apologize. This chapter was a very heart wrenching chapter. 5🌟's

Liking the flow as much as in the way you are revealing each characters transition of their persona.

Another 5🌟's