All Comments on 'Grand Departure'

its always great to have hot and sexy sex like this,hearing them scream at first and beg for more after long hard sex is the way it is for real... they learn to love it all the time... Forced sex is always fun sex

I love your stories and this one's no exception. Could use a bit of grammatical work, but its totally hot! Keep up the awesome work!

Great story, really hot. You could have made it a bit longer though I feel and expanded on the ending, seems slightly rushed. Keep writing please!

Proper punctuation is needed to make it an easier read.

Consider spell check.