by MisterReason
You had a good story going until now and you ruined it entirely. How stupid can you get.
I like the story and am not fazed by the plot turns. It's a story - not just a recanting of sex acts, so may require reading skills.
Liked all the other stories, they were great. This turn seems like a bad idea, its not hot or especially exciting, plus all the great things your main character had going for him turned to mush- where's his integrity or care for the girl like before? Aint no way that guy would let this stuff happen. What happened to all his years of wisdom and experience vs some dumb kid with a lame blackmail bit a cell phone? I dont know, I just wish this chapter didnt exist.
I apologize. I thought I had successfully submitted the final chapter of this story before needing to have a health issue taken care of. I see that for some reason - probably a screw-up on my part because I'm a computer idiot - it not only isn't up, the whole thing seems to have vanished. I'm sorry about this, and if I can't find out where it went I will redo it. Sorry again - because I know waiting for part stories is a pain, and I thank you for your patience.
EVERY CHAPTER UP TIL NOW HAS BEEN GREAT, THIS ONE YOU FUCK UP ON
I DIDN'T LIKE GANG RAPES BUT I DO LIKE HAPPY ENDINGS,YOU COULD GET
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