All Comments on 'Grandpa’s Nude Day: Past & Present'

A first rate short story. Sexy, absorbing and well written by an author who consistently lives up to the 'lit' as well as the 'erotica' elements of the site's name. Thanks for an extremely enjoyable read once again.

Write what you know and you know how to write an incest story, that's for sure.

Yet, this story is not the typical all sex and no plot with flat character type of incest story. This is a real story, something that could be non-fiction. Moreover, it's a love story.

I found the characters well developed and the plot believable. The dialogue is spot on with just enough narative to explain and set up the next scene. Too many incest stories read so much like dreams, but this story read as if I was there peering over the back fence, evesdropping, and living vicariously in someone else's hot, sexy life, wishing it were my life.

For those detractors that you have and who are jealous of your gift, they need to read this story, a real story to know who the talented writers are around here.

Good luck in the contest. Unfortunately, it takes more than luck to win a contest around here.

I don't usually read incest stories but gave yours a shot. I'm glad I did.

Yeah like BFW you need about 40 ALTS.

I loved every moment of it. It had elements of tease, comedy, romance, and seduction. Well written, my erstwhile writer.

This story was incredible, it was still an incest story, which I don't generally like, but it was in such a different way that I wasn't really that creeped out by it. Truly fantastic, I'm glad I gave it a shot.

Something for all ages in this awesome story. Well, everyone over 18, anyway. If this incestuous epic that defies the laws of the generation gap doesn't win the Nude Day Contest, we know it's fixed.

After all the idiocy you posted on the forums, I'm really surprised that you posted an entry into the contest. The only person reading it is you. Your alts are making all the comments. So I thought I'd give you one non-scouries-alt comment:

The time has come for Laurel and Manu to do something about the lunatics who ruin the site, the forums and the contests for everyone else.

PLEASE site owners, get rid of:

scouries and all of his alts

sarahhh (I think she's actually an alt of scouries') and all of her alts

bostonfictionwriter and all of his alts

I realize that when you count up all their alts, it will reduce site membership by at least 5%, but please consider the absolute breath of fresh air the rest of the members and contributors will be able to breathe without their bullshit stinking up the place!

Your Story brought Back memories of the lovely young girls I Loved in that part of NY The fresh blessledly endowed country girls that hag been involved in the husbandry of life when their juices began to flow. They gave me a wonderful education

Hey James,

Another great story. Damn!! I love reading your stories.

Thanks

Spicey

If you don't like this kind of stories then do us all a favour and don't read them thus saving the rest of us the from putting up with your rants.

Who reads them?

I tripped over one and sincerely hope I never see another.You are entitled to your point of view but, please, take it somewhere else.

Your comments don't improve this site.

'Bye.

this was a great story, if people don't like it they should'nt read it. keep up the good work

yes, this one needs to be continued and maybe throw in grandma and granddaughter together with great Uncle joe. now that would be a good long story to recite. thanks

continue

The happiest relative ever known in this world. Uncle Joe's a Five Star member on the family tree. As for grandma, she still gets the points of the Stars.

This is a great story! I so very much appreciate proofread, and eloquently written smut. 5/5 !

And, to the person spewing hatorade behind the mask of anonymity, go home. And seek therapy- it will help with your issues of irritability and insecurity.

This story like many of the others cries, no begs, for follow up and continued development. You have a real talent for character development, coupled with a droll sense of humor and what all raconteurs strive for: great timing.

Of course, we being physicians of a certain age and a New Yorker also from Columbia U. helped some in particularly enjoying this story.

Again I want the story to continue

More than excellent

Wow, need more of Amanda and Uncle Joe

Great story !! Why do you use the word "her sex" ?? Sex is what you do with another person.Not a name of a body part

I really enjoyed it, but yet again, it felt unfinished.

Sorry I couldn't give a 10 in place of a 5 !

Super fun and sexy!!!!! More please!!!!!