All Comments on 'Grave Seduction'

This sounds like the start of an excellent vampiress story - just my cup of tea. More please!

You paint a very erotic but poetic picture. The story had a very surreal, dark beauty to it that kept a wonderful pace the entire time. You are a very adept writer, and I dare say you are wasting the story by placing it here instead of possibly turning it into a book. I hope you continue to write and I would enjoy reading more of your work, erotic or not.

You simply HAVE to continue this story. I was still erect @ the end of this too brief tale, sadly. I dig vampires, dated a couple when I was younger, in fact. Memories. Mammaries. sigh

Oh well, that was in the past.

You write well. PLEASE, please go on with this encounter!

I (WE all) are waiting.

; ) ^V^

Gosh. Please continue? I see a sequel!?