All Comments on 'Great Temptations'

You never disappoint! Hot, wet and slightly;-) wild. Good job as ever. It is always a pleasure to get sweaty with one of your stories

Why did the women's names change halfway through?

How many women are involved in this story? It seems there are only two but there was Amanda, Heather, Tonia and Jess. if you can't manage to maintain the same names for your characters you should not be trying to write fiction!

I apologize to you all for the mistake, I have edited this story again and made sure the names don't change halfway through. What happened in brief explanation was that I changed the names with word and it only caught half of them for some reason. I failed to go back and check one final time before submitting the story.

Above ranking of a hundred is because I'm partial and know that this story has been fixed and will be changed to its correct form soon.

Very hot, but feels like you dropped it in the middle. What does he do with Heather? Tonia says "fuck me like I was your slut to use any way you want" ... so is she? Again, it's hot, but there's no resolution. (Fortunately, this particular flaw is easily remedied ... hint, hint.)