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AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
Good Story!

I like this story. Keep it up. I would like to read a little more dialogue though, but other than that, good story.

kydreamrkydreamrabout 19 years ago
Nice start

This guy's got heartbreaker written all over him.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
Great

This was nice i'd like too see more of this story keep it up

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
INTENCE,

CURIOUS FOR MORE

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Want more!

Definitely continue please.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
HUH?

Ths was surprisingly not completely stupid and has real promise if edited.

chocolatesistachocolatesistaabout 10 years ago
tease

Please write more

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Yawn

Very boring. I'm happy that it was only one page. There was no build up to the developing relationship. It read like a middle schooler's jerk off creation. Truly a lame story line.

Where do people "drill" for gold?

Hang on to your job at Wendy's. Before long you'll be promoted to Fry Man. After that the sky's the limit.

Allegedly_LiterateAllegedly_Literateover 3 years ago

Great start. I would like to read more about Cade and Shirley to see where things go. Thanks for sharing your creativity.

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I am Samuelx. I am Black. I am Male. I was born in Cap-Haitien, Northern Haiti, and raised in Brockton, Massachusetts. I now live in Canada. I am the one and only Haitian Trickster, and quite simply live only by my own rules. I...