All Comments on 'Green Tea with Jasmine Pt. 01'

by ArchieWaltham

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naughtywriter2naughtywriter2over 8 years ago
This is so well written!

I can hardly wait to read more! You inner thoughts and your two little tag alongs are captivating to say the least.

ArchieWalthamArchieWalthamover 8 years agoAuthor
Thanks

Thanks, the next one will be up tomorrow, I hope you like it!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

Faux snuff is no more erotic then the real. Without that, this would be a strong story. As is, it will be the inspiration for idiots.

ArchieWalthamArchieWalthamover 8 years agoAuthor
All criticism is constructive

I hope you'll keep reading, the choking stops in this episode.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Loved it!!

Really loved this apart from the choking. You have a great style and insight. Loved the 2 devils :)

ArchieWalthamArchieWalthamover 8 years agoAuthor
Thank you so much

The second instalment is already up, I hope you'll go check it out. I've varied the sex because I want to keep the audience entertained as well as aroused. Thanks for reading and for responding!

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