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AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Great Story

This is a great story as are all of your stories. I really enjoy your work

TE999TE999over 17 years ago
A touching tale...

of love in the Autumn of life. Poignant and evocative. I really enjoy your stories, Beth. Take care.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Fantastic! One of Beth's best stories.

There is always a wonderful scene or line in each of her stories that sticks in my head, in this story it is the shower scene and the line about 'digging to China'. Just so vivid. I also enjoyed the dance number with the 'dry humping like teenagers'. That brought back some great memories. I love how she builds a set of believable characters then lets them evolve and grow though the story. The imagery is fantastic. The sex is sensual and implied rather than being overly graphic. All in all, perfect for me.

Julie

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Yes, one of the best!

Captivating, yet so relaxed and

Real---a wonderful study into the

Intimate discussions and actions of two

People who are not only obvious

Partners, but also deep

Levels of well rooted relationships.

Excellent as always!

Eileen

dazzleredd41dazzleredd41over 10 years ago
awwwwww

best love story ever

NC22371NC22371over 9 years ago
Confusing

Very disjointed, and did not flow nicely and easily. And is it Janet or Jackie?????

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
oldies

Yes,sensual/sexual love still exists as one gets older....I ought to know..I am 72 years old !,,,,,,A very nice story !

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

So nice.

FranziskaSissyFranziskaSissyabout 2 years ago

So warm so touching so lovely so true, a love in the late years fullfilled will bring a deep true feeling ...... Wonderful written

Ten hearts ten stars 💝💝💝💝💝💝💝💝💝✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨

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