by marybethf
This is a great story as are all of your stories. I really enjoy your work
of love in the Autumn of life. Poignant and evocative. I really enjoy your stories, Beth. Take care.
There is always a wonderful scene or line in each of her stories that sticks in my head, in this story it is the shower scene and the line about 'digging to China'. Just so vivid. I also enjoyed the dance number with the 'dry humping like teenagers'. That brought back some great memories. I love how she builds a set of believable characters then lets them evolve and grow though the story. The imagery is fantastic. The sex is sensual and implied rather than being overly graphic. All in all, perfect for me.
Julie
Captivating, yet so relaxed and
Real---a wonderful study into the
Intimate discussions and actions of two
People who are not only obvious
Partners, but also deep
Levels of well rooted relationships.
Excellent as always!
Eileen
Very disjointed, and did not flow nicely and easily. And is it Janet or Jackie?????
Yes,sensual/sexual love still exists as one gets older....I ought to know..I am 72 years old !,,,,,,A very nice story !
So warm so touching so lovely so true, a love in the late years fullfilled will bring a deep true feeling ...... Wonderful written
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