by sr71plt
So regularly, I am so entertained by your writing. How can you be this consistently good?
Bob's seduction of Craig feels very real; As a reader, I could believe the evolution from two guys with cars in common to lovers, and then ultimately, to partners.
The fourth paragraph from the end, I think it should have been "Craig struggled and fought him, but...". Anyhow, one small typo doesn't keep this from being a 5 star piece of writing.
Your story was so good that I smiled through the whole thing. I loved it. You write so wonderfully. It really captivated my attention. Awesome job.
Guess that's all I have to say...it's just perfect!
I've read this story several times already. Interesting characters, nice writing style and good build-up. Great ending. Loved it. One of my favorite stories.
I was definitely not expecting that but I really love the ending! Great story! 5 Stars!