All Comments on 'Guilty Pleasures Ch. 05'

by Many Feathers

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Eric_ShiftEric_Shiftover 14 years ago
Unbelievably HOT

Just keeps heating up. Keep it going please

Eric_ShiftEric_Shiftover 14 years ago
Unbelievably HOT

Just keeps heating up. Keep it going please

digdaddyrichdigdaddyrichover 14 years ago
I had hope that he would have fucked her by now

I hope when Jen and Jared get together it's not a one off deal. That the young stud turns her on so much that she fucks him all summer. Maybe she finds out that she is fertile and can bare children when Jared knocks her up.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
nice to see

no taboos here. I think it's sick to have fantasies first to put a marriage in danger and make a frindly couple become swingers (what a risk to loose them, but it shows their feelings were not friendly otherwise you would not take the rist the way it was done here)and then just to make it sicker not let their own child decide what kind of sexuality he wants to develop. no to decide we make out of him a completly pervert with no morals at all, so why should he not start with cheating into a marriage and also going behind the feelings he has towards a girl his age and cheat on her too. this is evil minded and not enjoyable.

Many FeathersMany Feathersover 14 years agoAuthor
Ok...

My question would be, why the hell did you even read it in the first place? And secondly, why even come here to read anything at all as most if not all of this is what...PURE fantasy? Not real? No one is actually involved etc etc etc?

Cracks me up...people get so upset over a story, purely fictional, the people aren't real...(or did you forget that?)

Like I said...why do you even bother to come here to Lit in the first place if all you can do is complain about what's been written.

Got to love these people

Ducky7Ducky7over 14 years ago
Jen is one very lucky woman

Between Jen and Sue, the men in the two houses are in for some very good sex. Well done as always thanks.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
When Wife

Takes better care of a kid than her own husband thats pretty bad. Husband has to jack off kid gets a blow job and I'm sure it gets worse. glad I don't share your fantasy's

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
many feathers....

....you write well.But you don't understand that when you present something to the public that is twisted in nature they are going to react in all sorts of ways.The twisted ones will give you positive reinforcement, the curious but somewhat(?) moral ones will slander your story and some, like myself,who are twisted in ways you can't fucking imagine will give you half-points because your fantasy is boring.Doing a kid is fucking boring for a real woman.And erotica has to be believable,fiction or not.Pistolpackinpete

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
nope...

coffee incident? OK. I can believe that. Dropping the skirt as well. Loosing the thong, no way! Panties fashion show? Then the whole panties jerking-off and dry-humping scence... That is what I do on a weekly basis with my neighbor kid... NOT. No discussion between Jen and Rob? no aftermatch between the couple?

It makes the previous chapter panties episode and 90% of this one worthless...

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