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All Comments on 'Gwennalyn's Sexual Awakening Ch. 13'

by majicman21

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AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago

Not bad. It was much the same as the rest of the chapters, with little in the way of exploring the mental state of the princess. I can appreciate the world-building aspects, but would have liked to see more of Gwenny's inner dialogue or more of the shifting relationship with her handmaid.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Excellent update

Liked the history lesson and the discussions about her submission.

Looking forward to her falling deeper into her handmaids control. And also her being submissive in humiliating circumstances.

Do consider some way to indicate that a section has ended. The changes, especially between cemetery and welcoming the Prince, are rather abrupt.

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