All Comments on 'Gym Daze'

Too short, not sexy, the characters range from boring to horribly unlikeable, and the ending (whatever ending there is) is stupid beyond recognition. No redeeming qualities whatsoever.

This is obviously your first story so people should cut you some slack. The outline of the story is good but next time try lengthening it out. Develop the story more and give the characcters some depth. It was good attempt for a first story. I hope you keep at it. :)

I would recommend that you ignore the first comment and heed the advice given in the second. Your story is really good but I would love it if you developed the plot and characters more. But then again it is a first time go.

i want you in me now

This successfully made me hard...your description in the beginning of the relationship between Matt and Lori reminds me of myself and my girlfriend, although we do not live together just yet.

Sexy story but wish it had been longer!