by Samuelx
C- Creativity --NONE
R- Repetitive theme
A - Antipathy to good writing
P- Pretty awful
4*s, though its actually better than that, just not a 5.
More of a chapter one than a stand alone story though, IMO, so I assume you'll continue it. If so, Im looking forward to the second part.
It speaks to how life really is,,, with just a little twist. But, I agree, this should be chapter 1.
PN
I’ve always thought your previous works formulaic, but this one is good! Looking forward to the next chapters.