All Comments on 'Half Asian College Co-Ed'

Sorry, this is just racist crap.

and a fucking jackass

im not a big fan of the racism in the bedroom, but i wouldnt mind being jerked around and called a whore or bitch maybe... i am asian, just for a point...

I wont say the guy is racist, because, well, we all done strange things in the bedroom. I had a girll bite me so hard that she left a scar in the perfect formation of her bitemark on my shoulder. That was five years ago and its still here. I thought i was a pretty good piece of writing

I also will not say the guy is a racist -- Considering he blatantly states that the comments/words/names he used were racist. In turn defeating such retorts. Also I don't use anonymous as a 'Who are you'. Think the Author should delete the purely destructive criticism. But that's just my belief.

Didn't entirely read the submission though. Mostly just a glance. Writing style isn't particularly eye-catching for me.

It's just a story...

Get a grip, chill, it's not for real. If it is, it is!!

It was verry hot to this reader.

It is a non-fiction, fake, not real, prevarication people. If you get offended by the use of words that your mother called racist......DON'T READ IT! Better yet, form a committee to choose someone who will select a special prosecutor that will run the author through a fine mesh sieve and take the trapped particles to a fortune teller for review. The results can then be analyzed by another sub-committee who will then forward prosecution suggestions to congress. Then you can organize a campaign rally for Mrs. Bill Clinton to help ensure her election so that you and others like you will have the laws passed that will ensure that we all think just like you. Wouldn't that be great?

Accusations of racism seem a bit over-sensitive. I once had an asian girlfriend for a while and she actually used to encourage racial dirty talk - both ways. As much as she enjoyed hearing me talk dirty, I must admit it was hot to hear how she wanted the "white bastard cock". It's all part of the eroticism and getting hot by saying things that are taboo. Away from the sex, I am sure she didn't regard me as a "white bastard". ;-)

us half asian girl's love us some full breed cock!! :P

Would've been better if you kept repeating the exact words he used in his racist barrage.

i'd love to know :)

Loved this story! I wrote one about a girl I liked, but it's nowhere near as smooth reading as this, and I'm not sure I'll ever post it...

Made it halfway(?) through and gave up because he was treating her disrespectfully and ineptly and it was too unrealistic, even for fiction.

I came to this story because Joe456 has an intriguing Japanese story (Kondo San?) and in his Favorites, he lists a story by orientaddict. The moniker, orientaddict, also drew me. But I'm bailing out now.

In contrast to this story, Step-Yellow Fever is a respectful story about twin Japanese step-sisters written by n2anal178.

Paul in Oklahoma

Simply too abusive for me.

Definitely racist. lol

Lots of ppl commenting are confusing an asian fetish with racism lol. If you had written "asian cunt" instead of something straight up racist it would've been better. Racial dirty talk is suppose to be uplifting and not just racism lol. But that's probably because this is an old story with ppl saying they enjoyed the racism and not even the normal fetish