All Comments on 'Half Sisters'

Kind of rushed at the end when mom discovers them and then offers them toys. Maybe you are planning on a part two?

Not bad felt rushed.

Fun but rushed and too short. Barely got going and it was all over! (The word 'sure' is missing in the 1st para!)

Became rushed at the end. Especially after m caught them. This story is open to a lot of possibilities. Mom might even be up to joining her daughters