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prop69prop69almost 6 years ago
AWESOME story

What a surprise

Loved the story.

Hope you have another chapter

Maybe the smart one will win

nonamesjustpunchnonamesjustpunchalmost 6 years agoAuthor
thanks

The original version was much darker and ended very badly for Steve, but it was rejected. I edited it to make it more suitable. I based it on a recurring nightmare.

Eve_of_EdenEve_of_Edenover 3 years ago

Great erotic horror. Thanks for sharing!

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I like writing stories. I'm nervous about sharing them with the world, but feedback and constructive criticism are always welcome. I love hearing what others think of my stories. So, if you think there's a way they could be better, let me know. Thanks.