All Comments on 'Halloween Homecoming'

This begs for a 2nd chapter - get writing !

One of the best!..Definitely needs a sequel!

This is a fantastic story. I hope you have a sequel planned to continue.

Great story but it needs to continue. BTW, this is the first time I have ever left a response!

Awesome story. Please write the sequel. There is so much potential with what you developed. However, it stands alone as one hot narrative.

What great and creative was to start a story. It does however, deserve to be continued.

Please continue, I can't wait to find out about his "real" homecoming.

Good story beginning. Please make sure to write a sequel.

You have a hit here a over the top hot hit! You had me on the edge of my seat. You put together a classic love story that includes true physical realism. I was visualizing each scene in my minds eye. You have me now and can't wait until the next part.

Loved the story! Cannot wait for the second part.

So, does our hero take advantage of his father's dark side to bring him in line? Does his sister seek him out? Will he stay to wreck havoc on the neighbourhood relationship web?

Yes, a sequel would be most welcome!

I so hope that you continue this wonderful story. The erotic sex is a good part of the story, but the love that came through along with the taboo sex was what I thought was the basis of the story.

I do want to read when mom and sis find out who their mystery lover is and want to be with him again and again.

Everything about the story is top shelf, the writing, and character base both done superbly well.

The carefully constructed build-up with both scenes of incest love and sex, were so well laid out that it made the eventual sex even better. Thanks for this well written and beautifully conceived story.

MORE IS NOT NECESSARILY BETTER. As it stands, it is an outstanding story! I thoroughly enjoyed it. Thank you for sharing it with us.

This story had one big mistake: after reading that, I didn't want to read other stories, because I liked this one so much that I was afraid that no other story can be as good as this. Keep writing - it was absolutely wonderful!

Since the sister clearly knew who she was fucking, I would like to see if you take it to the point the mother gets some again but I would do it in a shocking manner, like she notices something about him that wasn't there before like the tattoos.

You need to continue the story. This was to good to stop now.

A very hot and sexy story. Great job.

I thoroughly enjoyed the pacing, the way you explained the characters and their relationship as it stood, and the erotic way they came together. It was totally believable, given some of the reality I've witnessed. I hope you write more, tho this story should be finished, as is. Great read!

~Tori

...deserves some more parts. You did a wonderful job, so please keep going!

Is there a sequel?

whats next

We need to know more about Mom and Son....Sis, too. Lots of room for development in this story line. AnHoa Rifleman

This story need more chapter to let us see what happens next. MORE MORE

story demands sequel to finish interplay between family.

This was an excellent story, but I agree with previous commenters that it begs for a sequel. There are several questions left unanswered, and I would really like to know how the story plays out. Too many authors write half a story and then abandon it; please finish the tale - or at least tie up some of the loose plot threads!

The story was mind blowing but it begs a sequel...plesae do a next part ASAP..

Throughout mankind, and in particular during a human's lifetime, there are some things that happen that are so bizarre, weird, amazing and uncanny they seem impossible to have occurred. The fact that a regular service U. S. Marine is discharged after tours in Iraq, sneaks home after not having seen his family in several years, in a costume fully disguised for a Halloween Party thrown by his parents annually, spends several hours at the party with limited contact with anyone but his sister and his mother; his mother doesn't have any idea he is her son, but his sister might have guessed he is her brother by a small mole she sees on his right shoulder. He leads his sister off to the shed, literally, spends about an hour with her fucking her for all they handle; his sister wants him to fuck her again but Tony is reluctant as they might get caught and Tony also fears she really might recognize hm. Tony then helps his mother put her husband, Tony's drunk passed out father to bed, consoles her for awhile because she is now embarrassed; then lots of kissing and foreplay, he eats her pussy and then after a long fuck, more kissing, it's late but he helps his mother clean up the messed up kitchen and living room and then bids his (unknowing) mom a specially sensitive goodbye!! He's spent about three hours there at his parent's party; afterwards he goes back to his motel (he's rented for the night) planning to go (back) home tomorrow as the real Tony, son and brother!

What's the odds? Nil and None!! Fortunately for reader's of Literotica pornography we see that the uncanny, bizarre and the weird does happen. Even better, we get a carnal, incest sexual stroke story of a twenty-three just discharged U. S. Marine Corp veteran that has fucked his mother lovingly, and stroked his sister lustily; both are not sure who he is, and he has dipped his dick in both within a couple hours. Simply amazing!

Hoping to see chapter 2 very soon. So hot and wet with this one. Thank you!

Tony's mother has been faithful to a drunk gay husband that humiliates her when he is drunk . The mother needs Tony to permently filling the emptiness in her life . Tony also needs to bring his sister life long happiness completing the family affair . That only leaves the girl at the costume store . You have a great story that needs completion , at least a couple of chapters . Looking forward to it's completion .

The only thing I will say is Semper Fi!!!!! OOOW RAH

i gave u a 5 i thought it a great read

Glad you had the hero just disappear into the night.

For me it was just the right touch on many levels

That was an easy five! ...hell, and I don't typically care for mother/son stories, very well done! I'm just pissed there isn't another chapter or three!! Dammit :)

Thanks very much for writing it!

...i guess if he wants to let mom know it was him without saying anything he just needs to wear a sleeveless shirt or come down shirtless for morning coffee and she spots the tats, hehe ;)

...a bi/gay dad, hell that would throw anyone for a fucking loop! Talk about getting the creepers, having your dad check you out, lol! Eww!!

where's the part 2?

I gave you a 5, only because 10 is not an option. Excellent pacing, descriptions, right amount of reluctance then climax. Only criticism is that no one does five years straight of a foreign tour; that undermined the credibility early on. But hey, I quickly got past that!

Don't stop , please more

please continue this story i want to see them know that tammy and his mom know that they had fucked him it it only right they knew it was him

Weather you do chapters about the girl at the costume store , or his sister that is up to you . The mother in this story is leading a miserable life . The son could change that all around by coming back into her life and becoming her lover and replacing her husband who's interests lies elsewhere . This is a wonderful story but it needs a great ending .

part 2 please.

This story has the makings of a very beautiful set of chapters! You just need a part 2 3 and maybe 4. This could very well be one of the better chapter series out here that most of us love to read! A good story is told from start to finish. This seems like the perfect begining of a much larger story!

Great story

what a hot story, so much more fun to be had yet though. Please keep going.

marine son needs to return so they know it was him. more.

I didn't like the shaved pussy. I don't like the six year old look on a woman...

Halloween is around the corner & we need him to come home to his mom & sister whiling kicking his dad's ass!

Please don't leave this story here.

More please

Please do at least the homecoming and reveal. Please?

I loved it what a brilliant story. Sexy and romantic. What a lucky boy

Definitely needs a follow-up did they all still respect each other in the morning.?

Please tell me that Tammy knew the truth and realised she had just made love

with her brother.

You can’t leave the story like that. There’s a lot more to this story, get your arse into gear and finish it..⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

good story, excellent if endi is changed, where son confess to mom instead of going back.

Simple. Wish it was longer.

Mom slowly moved her ass from side to side, rubbing her firm bottom across my jutting staff,

He is a foot taller than she is and her bottom is going to rub his crotch?

Do another chapter please

Have to finish this. One more chapter!

This story came out almost 12 years ago and it's still one of the best Halloween incest stories on Lit. Only one problem... it's screaming for a part 2 that resolves all the cliffhanger it left. Just about every comment begs for more. I don't know if the author quit writing/publishing here or not but my hope is inspiration will strike and they write part 2 Soon. thanks for sharing!

Another Chapter, Please!

Dam this one needs more but with dates on this one not going to happen I guess. Good story.

The story was cool. But how the hell was he in Iraq for 5 years straight. Most rotations where six months to a year before you went back stateside for a a year before they could rotate you back in. 5 years the MC might have 3 tours if his Division was super active in being rotated. Would have had plenty of time to be back home and see his family over that time. But the rest of the story was a banger

@ EvelZombie: Yeah, I think the author took a little (or a lot) liberty with the Marine Corps experience. I know that when I was in, that 12 weeks of boot camp was the longest damn year of my life! But it was a great story, I’d just like to see what happens when he gets home the next day. Thanks, RWll, for a very nice story.

5⭐️s.

@ EvelZombie: Yeah, I think the author took a little (or a lot) liberty with the Marine Corps experience. I know that when I was in, that 12 weeks of boot camp was the longest damn year of my life! But it was a great story, I’d just like to see what happens when he gets home the next day. Thanks, RWll, for a very nice story.

5⭐️s.

A beautiful story. The fact that it was sweet and non vulgar was what put it over the top. I would just about sell my soul for the sequel when he next comes home . . . .