by DG Hear
A little saccharin but provided more than a few moments of mirth and the occasional chuckle.
But I loved it anyway. I have enjoyed all of your stories, even the ones with sad endings.
Great concept for a story. I have never read anything like it before. Great entertainment!
I laughted so hard that I almost spilled my coffee. What a great way to start the day...with laughter. Enjoy all your submissions. Keep up the Great Work!
I put this story in non-erotic because there wasn't any erotica in it. It isn't really erotic humor. Just some situations that make me laugh. Hope you got a chuckle or two also. Thanks for reading, voting, and commenting on my story
With respect
DG Hear
for a pleasant story. I did not roll on the ground, probably because all my joints ache!
I'm just glad that I wasn't having any milk when I read your story/jokes or I most certainly would have done the ol' squirting-milk-through-the-nose gaff. Truly delightful work. Thanks for the great chuckle!!!
Great job turning various, well-known jokes into a comprehensive, great flowing story. I loved ever second of it. Good luck hon! ~Minx
Three big grins and a chuckle. Thoroughly enjoyed it. Good luck in the contest.
Your biting humor gets me bursting out in a fit of laughter everytime. I've heard many of the punchlines before, but watching play out in your tale made them sound like new again. Thanks for the good times.
That made me smile...and giggle. Tons of fun. Happy I didn't miss this one! Almost makes me want to find someone to grow old with so I can share silly things like that with them...almost ;)
This goth girl definitely loved it. My friends and I always joke about how everyone seems to bring their visiting parents to out to our favorite goth club. (And the parents love it) Her costume made me think of that. It's only the second story I have ever forwarded to a friend, the first of course being the story that won the contest.
I'm not usually caught off guard. Pretty much heard everything once and done it twice... However. ..
Truth? You just had me shoot vodka out my nose... It burns... Oh, how it burns.... Congratulations.
DGH. you made me laugh outloud! Startled the hell out of ,y keepers who believed me to be comatose.
"Now cut that out!" Don'tcha know that humor is suppose to be a very serious subject?