All Comments on 'Halloween Masque'

An absolutely beautifully developed story....I'm so hot I plan to go get off immediately. Please keep up the excellent work!

Kisses

Baia

It has been quite some time since ive read something not only so erotic, but genuinely interesting as well. I couldnt wait to find out who was who! Fantastic job.

Congratulations on a very well thought out and executed story that not only incorporated the Halloween theme extremely well, but was erotic and VERY exciting to read. You got a resounding 5 from me and I wish you the very best in the contest.

Green_Gem

Very seldom do you find someone who can write a well developed, well written erotica story. Very satisfying piece. Fabulous job!

Quite possibly the best erotic story I have ever read. Well developed, no trite phrases (I really appreciate that) and great descriptions of ladies and their bodies. And then there's the descriptions of the loving. I can't call it fucking because all the "events" were depicted in very loving terms. Thank you and please, please again?

Larry

I really enjoyed the story line and the dialog was well done. The anonymous lover idea is always so sexy and you did it well!

What a story! It gripped me from beginning to end. I used a whole box of Kleenex on this one!

Very well written and unusual at times (the frottage against the Halloween costume!). My only suggestion is that you used the word clitoris quite a bit and in this situation it comes across as rather clinical. Even "clit" might have been sexier. Good luck!!

Long but well worth the read.

Great sex but the clever dialogue is the really excellent part of this story. Well written with some dry humor.

The author is familiar with personages of the past, real and literary.

Really enjoyed this.

This story was excellent. I very much enjoyed not just the very steamy sexual encounters, but the overall plot. The characters were very well developed for such a short piece and quite frankly have left me wanting to read more about them, both erotic and non-erotic. A very big thank you to the author for a wonderfully told tale.

I am already planning a party like this for Halloween this year. One of the best stories I even read. The build up, the sex scenes, the storyline, I can go on and on. You are a wonderful writer and I want to read more from you.

Recently I've been looking at a little 19th Century art by the young artist Aubrey Beardsley. When I saw what he was doing I was quite take with it. In style it really reminds me of what I wrote here. If you want to imagine fanciful drawings for this story, just do an image search for "Aubrey Beardsley".

~The Author

I always have fun on Halloween, and had an erection while reading this story. Very erotic and sexually stimulating.

This was a great read, but my disbelief had to be "not so much suspended as hanged, drawn, and quartered". If I were at such a party I'd know my lover by her voice as soon as she said anything -- and there's a lot of talking here.

And I appreciated your fictional story. That being said, I agree with another commentator that the voice would have allowed me to know my partner immediately. And with that in mind, it put a damper on my enjoyment of the story. And I still had a bad feeling about him engaging in random sex with unknown partners in an unknown situation. And given the fact that she was his girlfriend for a relatively short period of time, I'm thinking he probably would have decided that it was the better part of valor to NOT go to the party in the first place. Too many bad outcomes possible. But that would have made for "No Story". Carry on.

Well done. As a male this was very hot but one thing bothered me and I can't figure out a way around it in the story line but the voices. You'd know immediately by the voice is my thought. Secondly, this would be great to see a he said she said and explore the bookend of Faye's night there. Great job.