by Ashson
Because he's gong to get fucked a lot in prison. i wonder if he'll climax.
In fact, it was just about his worst. It was rape all the way; her climax doesn't change that fact.
Usually Ashson's women have done something to provoke their rape, and which in reality would be immaterial at least as described on these pages it appears that the whole thing happened in a spirit of good fun. This one didn't.
But, later in the story: "Then she was shrieking into her hands...."
Still attached to the tent posts?
You really slipped on this one. Only 2* from me this time. Technical as well as writing errors.
...or has someone purloined your identity here and posted this lesser story as yours?
These latest stories the last few months are really terrible.
Not sure what happened or what is going on in real life with the writer, but it's not the same.
Something is VERY off.
Running out of scenarios.
I was hoping to get up to 1,000 stories.
I have 956 and the characters aren't speaking to me any more.
May have to give it a break and write children's fantasy. I've already started on that. I'll see how it goes.
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Why do you keep reading these types of stories? They just piss you off.
Change Adam's name to Donald Trump, Debbie morphs to Nancy O'Dell and we have the makings of a spicy noncon story. Or use Bill Clinton and Paula Jones depending on political affiliation but the million won't work because if memory serves, being Governor of Arkansas paid 37,000 dollars at least in first term. If Ashson is looking for fresh inspiration in this genre , politics is a fertile field.
Dude (this was clearly written by a male):
NO woman goes camping in a skirt.
You might think of taking a few of your stories and stringing them together and make something a little longer. You do write great and I have enjoyed almost all of your stories.
And I enjoyed it. I say: Well done. And I'm not so literal as to care about the hands inconsistency. In the words of Emerson, consistency is the hobgoblin of ....
Five stars from me. JB