All Comments on 'Hang-ups'

Well written with an interesting contrast of characters.

The fact that it was a learning experience for both characters made for an interesting read.

Well done!

once again you've brought a vivid realism to your story that leaves me hard and wanton. Truly you are one of the best erotic writers I have read. Keep that wonderful sexy mind of yours active and I look forward to your next story. You are my inspiration to write better stories myself. Thanks Colly!!

Always a pleasure, Colleen.

You're just full of surprises, aren't you?

;-)

If this isn't stuff you're already familiar

with, then your research is amazing.

Thanks,

Jane

Loved it!!

depraved woman, I couldn't love you more. That story rocked.

Plenty of humor, sex, and satire. Hmmm...not to mention a look at some fascinating, but all-too-believable characters. Just glad that you didn't make them saints. A few flaws add depth indeed.

You are a fabulous writer!!! It's nice to know I'm not the only one who had trouble with the strap on thing, it does take a lot of work, but definitely worth it. I'm glad you have kept on writing.

Very Refreshing!

I've been reading/writing for years, and have become pretty jaded, so reading something about Friends helping friends was pretty cool!

I must say how much I miss your writing. You were truly one of the most gifted erotic writer I've had the pleasure of reading. Others have come close but, no one consistently produced so many realistically believable and incredible hot stories.

This however, was not your best work. Rape is nothing like fiction; you can't begin to imagine. I can't fathom any sane woman being OK with -or getting off on- being drugged and then forcibly raped and sodomized by a "friend." Or later forgiving that person's actions and betrayal, such that they pursue further sex with them.

So, you bat .999 out of 1.000, cuz you struck out looking here.

a rapist doesnt ask if you are okay, they drug you up to keep you out, they do not welcome victim coming out of drug induced relaxation, this was unorthadox but it was handled with sensitivity that kept out the violence of rape and the sensitivity of the writer was recognizable...good job, honestly creative maybe if i had a friend like Bren i'd have learned sooner too, instead of carrying around my hangups for so long. lol, seriously!

Well-rounded, complete story. Loved it.

And it left me feeling pretty glum.

But this is still good.

Dear Colleen,

Well! I found my moving body! <3 I liked this story very much. What I liked particularly is that you introduced us to the characters mise-en-scène and then didn't bother us to explain every detail and hang-up in their lives to us in backstory. No, you kept us, and the characters, in the dark, kept the story moving along nicely, and you let them discover themselves and each other.

I really, really, really liked that Brenda ended up liking fucking Suzy ('not a chore') and that Suzy ended up liking getting fucked by Brenda, and what a fucking it was!

Whew! New panties and a hot shower, please!

What we didn't get, now, was intimacy. I would love for Brenda to love Suzy and for Suzy to love Brenda. Hugs, kisses, whispered words of love while they're fucking.

Fuck. I'm losing my mind! Hugs and kisses and love between these two girls. Their husbands better step up their game in and out of the bedroom if they plan to keep these two.

Brenda and Suzy are friends, before and after their little escapade, and that's what I love about this story.

kisses, `phfina

Still rockin' the top charts! Kudos and thanks for your great stories.

Why did you quit writing in '06? A loss to us all. Hope you're well.... Peace.

Colleen stopped writing because she passed away. There is a memorial book written in her honor by Literotica authors. It is a short story collection with proceeds going to charity.

Colleen was pretty much universally loved on the Author's Forum. We were all emotionally devastated by her passing. For many, she was our first internet friend we lost this way.

It's part of a series called "Coming Together," edited by Allesia Brio.

💗💔

What a mess. Just a long winded justification for a racist rape and Drug story. If you can't write anything better than this - don't bother...

Nuts but so well written. Just read the comment below re Colleen's death. Such a shame.

excellent. keep writing.