All Comments on 'Hanky'

Your description of Kalpana's unshaven armpits was extremely erotic. Well done.

very very exciting story. next time around use words like INDIAN, TAMIL, DESI,..." in the TITLE so that it catches our attention. I almost missed this nice story. armpit love is highlight...there are so many armpit lovers around...thanx a lot. if u can avoid "incest" pparticularly - mother and son - it would make it more enjoyable. thanx a lot.

wow!!! great story. very very erotic. try to put some dialogue in desi language or may be in english when the characters are experiencing their orgasms.

One of the best erotica I have ever read!!!!. So realistic and so good!!!.

My suggestion is that mother could have been hairy in armpits too and the son should have enjoyed her armpits sweat, sweaty blouse etc.

Please don't end the story. continue it and try to include his mother's friends too!!!and if possible Kalpana's mother.

One more thing. This story is making me to look into your other stoires!!!

awesome story.....loved it......I am waiting for another one.....I like the part where they were sitting at thetable eating and he starts to touch her....can you eloborate a bit more

good one,i think we need more of such family drama

what about Madhuri's hairy armpits?

HIGHLY SEXY

sensuous and erotic. Reminded me of the time I had with my aunt.

one of the best..please write a sequel ...have all three of them do it togather or add a aunt or even better the sis-in-law's mother.

Once again awesome story by an excellent writer.

I am a die hard fan of your stories. I have read all your stories many a times. Actually I am in relation (sexincest) with my own devar (brother in law). So we together read your stories during our hot lovemaking sessions. Actually we fantasize and role play characters of your stories, to add hotness in our relation.

As an Indian lover and reader, we together (me and my devar) believe that nothing more erotic than incest-taboo and forbidden love.

As an incest couple, we thought, if this story had detailed description of religious ceremony before or during love-making, it would add more spice. For example if you could include Pooja (Prayer of God), some chants, some religious rituals than it would be PERFECT scenario for this kind of story.

Once again your stories are fuel to our hot & forbidden relation.

Keep it up.

Apni Ma ki boor chodne men jo maza aata hai wah gajab ka hai aur wah bhi Bhabhi ke boor, chut (pussy, cunt) ke sath. Madhuri ka husband main hota to Ashik ka gand bhi marta & Kalpana ko chod ta......

This may be 50th reading today.

Means 50th massage to my cock.

Slow deliberate passion building of incest love. Every son or devar will want to be Ashik to love buttocks of mom and kiss asshole of kalpana.

Madhuri is just wonderful to give herself to son.

Now my mom waiting in kitchen to love.

सिराजभाई

तुमच्या धमाल कथांमुळे मी वेडा झालो आहे. किती वेळा हस्तमैथुन करावे लागले याची गणना नाही.

ही कथा तर विलक्शण आहे.

वहिनीची गांड चाटणे व तिच्याशी संभोग तर फार मस्त. मी अनेकदा अनुभवला आहे. हल्लीच धाकट्या वहिनीने तिची फुगलेली गांड दाखवली व नंतर चावायला दिली. मला तिने योनीही चाटायला लावली. रसदार.

आता थांबतो आई वाट पहात आहे. आज आम्ही गुदमैथुन करायचे ठरविले आहे. कारण काका त्यासाठी तिची मवधरणी करीत आहेत़ त्याआधी तिला मी हवा आहे.

वैशाली वहिनी तसेच स्वातीवहिनीच्या मांड्या व गांड लईच रसरशीत आहे, त्यांना चाटायला मजा येते व नंतर लंडाच्या पिचकाऱ्यांनी भरुन टाकतो

Please write second part of this by including Vijay (elder brother) also joining the fun in your own way to have the whole family sex.......

Please send the second part soon......

mature lady in her late twenties

I do believe that any female in her late twenties would be outraged to be called mature.

Great...

Sensual and very Erotic