All Comments on 'Hannah and Mike Ch. 03'

Can't wait to read what happens next!!! These are good dude! Aside from a typo here & there, you're a pretty good writer! See ya next story!

-Jim

Really enjoying your writing. Like the other guy said a few typoes but nothing I can't around. We're not all perfect. lol. Can't wait for the next chapter. Keep it coming.

I'm waiting for the next chapter to this story.

Fantastic story,I think it's the best one i've read yet!!!Hope there's more cumming soon?

Where in the hell are OTHER stories like this one. I could save hundreds on my electric bill.

You were fantastic at describing the "tease" going on between the two. As a fan of teasing, you kept my attention to the exclusion of even a ringing telephone.

"Outstanding" just doesn't sound expressive enough. Now, let's see ya top it. (grin)

excellent, you got me from the begining, can't wait for next installment.

keep it CUMMING, vERY HOT STORY, i know THERE IS MORE..HAS TO BE!!

Great story, look forward to the next chapter.

Each story gets better and better!

This last one was fantastically HOTT!

I've been waiting for this scenario, this well written for years. Go and get yourself published. Thanks.

Sexy as fuck! Keep em' cumming!

omggg one of the best ive everrrr read!

please write more. :'(

fukin amazing!!!

Lots of nice little details about physical interactions. The scene feels real. And that makes it sexy!

Now I'll be able to sleep tonight..... thank you.

one of the best stories on the site please keep the storie going

i hated all of her teasing a normal guy would have got pissed and packed up and left for college keep it somewhat realistic please

Dunno about you buddy, but teasing is fun. Would be a lame story w/o it.

Very nice, so far - especially Chapter 4. Hope you'll write more, even after all this time. The story is definitely not complete!!

Hell, I'll be damned after all that workup if I'm going to lose the end of the show to her pulling off and blowing me for the finish, lol!

Your writing and creativity are great. Your editing and proofreading are sketchy. I always drop you a star when I encounter misspelled words, bad grammar, and awkward sentences. Please think about engaging an editor. If you do, you'll be five-star always.