by HeyAll
At first I didn't think the premise of your story would be very believable. But as I read it, I began to believe in these two characters. You did a very good job developing them, and the story was well-written and erotic.
not too many stories dealing with anal, with a lesbian twist! Kudos to you for writing such a hot story!
You did a very nice job of going slowly and building up the personalities of two women. I don't think you have written about lesbians at all. I think you have two close friends who are comfortable with each other, and you never wrote a lesbian scene, to my mind. Perhaps bi-curious would be the best description. Your writing is very professional, your character development is very well done, and you have not gone for cheap distasteful scat scenes. Look forward to seeing more of your material.
This is the first story of this genre of story I've ever read. I am not sure how to classify it? It was cute, very cute actually, erotic, subtle and stimulating. I'm actually at a loss for words, (Normally a good thing for me). I will read some of your other works. I'd like to explore your writing style some more. Oh, I rated you five. I a bit stingy on my ratings but it was very well done.
I didn't expect the story to go in that direction, so it was fun to read. The sex was hot. Nice work. I'm going to read some of your other stories. Thanks!
HeyAll is an incredibly gifted writer, not of simple pornography, but of exquisite erotica. Select any one of the numerous stories to read and enjoy an incredible journey. What a talent.
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Likable characters, nice slow progression, and nice little surprise at the end-she really loosened up....
Thoroughly enjoyed your story! I'll have to see what else you've written.
Very good start. I liked how slow and patient Stephanie was with her seduction.
This really has the potential to be made into a series.
Please consider the suggestion.
Wow, to make a situation that is obviously a little unbelievable read as totally believable, emotionally realistic and so erotically charged is a brilliant achievement.
Really enjoyed this, was taken along by it right to the end.
Very tastefully told story of two hot friends enjoying sex. Everything was expertly done - no 40" 12"around as her first toy. You work your way up.
Thank you for an educational and entertaining story. I really would like to meet these 2 ladies for fun and games.
I would like to explore the girls stories further. BTW MID THIRTIES IS NOT EVEN CLOSE TO "OVER THE HILL" WOMEN ARE AT THEIR SEXUAL PEAK AT THE AGE. MY Favourite time of live. I have helped a few women to relax and enjoy their sexual peaks. Time of my life...sigh!
Fun story, although Hannah is incredibly annoying: "no, no, no, no, no, no, FINE."
Hate the stars only go to 5. This story is a 500. Thank you so much. What a wonderful piece of writing
I was hoping that was going to happen. Girls can have more fun with each other which is good
A great story up to your normal high standard Thank you
This is the first of your stories that I have read. One word. Excellent. Well paced and beautifully descriptive. I have only just started to write and hope I can produce something of this quality.
Good story, need a next chapter where the two girls are buggered together by two men, then a group of men, having their arses stretched and licking up the cum as it dribbles out, and doing ATM together.