by Selena_Kitt
has been mentioned in today's New Story Review Thread in the Author's Hangout.
This is a sexy story. I love medical exam stories and this one has an interesting idea that I haven't read yet. I read the review of this one and think it could definitely be expanded on, but I also think it stands alone as it is, too. It was quite hot.
Yes, a rather strong reaction from the quiet sector but damn it...that was freakin hot and intense. Very well written and one of those you have to have more of...soon PLEASE!! Please, continue with this series SK...this one is so different for here and even from what i normally read which is a wide array of stories, but i'd love to continue with this one and see just how she handles this one and what's it going to take for her take this job *smile*...respectfully fan in Texas naynay
I wish I knew how you could write so well and so quickly. Are you sure there aren't like four of you writing as a team or something? The story was erotic and amazing.
I learn about women from some of your stories. You are an excellent writer. I don't read as many stories as I use too. To busy writing my own. Saw your name and had to give it a read. Very glad I did.
DG Hear
I said I would try to read some more of your stories and I have. I particularly like your varied themes and subjects. I have now added you to my favourite authors list and look forward to reading more, 'though looking at how many you've written, I don't know if I'll live that long!
Well done and keep writing
This story was very well written & sexy. I quite enjoyed it. Thanks.
You make me wish that I had gone to Med school and been that doctor. The way you describe and write the feelings that a woman experiences makes mr think that you have been there yourself. If that is what you feel, then may it happen to you again and again!
You are seriously talented. I like that you write on a variety of themes and always consistent quality. Keep those creative 'juices' flowing!
Just plain awesome but left me wanting more! The doctor should have tasted her. Mmmmmm....
If she permitted that procedure to proceed, ahem, enjoyable as it may have been, then it follows that she would accept employment, chuckles...
I had one floating around in my head for a while in precisely the same setting but the examining physician was a robot, ahem, and that was only chapter one.
Excellent write...thank you!
amicus...
This was such a tantalizing tease! I could visualize the entire examination, and wished that I was on that exam table. I hope there is a sequel.
This is a most enjoyable story. Someone earlier said that it isn't believable, but surely the whole reason for erotica is to suspend belief, if only for a few minutes, and to arouse the reader. Any form of erotica should do that or it fails in it's primary task. This story and most of Selenas other ones fulfill that function admirably.
Believable or not, it's skillfully crafted to provoke and arouse. I certainly aroused both of us, and I'd like to thank Selena for priming the pump, so to speak
You need to continue this. The first part was very good, but the story simply shouldn't end here, why have you left it in the middle of nowhere ?
Love it. Similar Doctor notations as in my Lynn story. Better, in fact. Couldn’t pleasure myself while reading it, bit will when I’m alone!