All Comments on 'Happy 4th of July, Mrs. Johnson'

Truly an erotic LW's story. Thanks for the fun read

Very nice, a loving wife, a loving husband, the way it should be.

Extremely well written. Story builds to a climax as their climax builds. Very, very effective. The descriptions and details were nothing short of genius. 5*'s and then some.

Superbly written, breathtaking to the very end.

Thanks you

There might have been more doubt about seducer ID if the party had been more work-group or neighbors rather than family.

Very nice TLW, well done!

Thank you!

M1

"1*" !

EWas it Mrs Johnson or Mrs Robinson? On the extreme side of well written flowing dramatic sultry seduction. The fact that the gathering was family took some of the edge off, but still worked. Thanks for the fun ride author! !

And it was Mr. Johnson. Just not Dan but his brother Tom.

Wonderful hot loving wife story. Really enjoyed the sneaky ending!

I've had my husband wake me like this, only I didn't have any clothes to deal with. Just the sheets.

So very hot & sexy!

well writen, well done, cant be fantasy ... u r either her or him!!! lol

What a lovely story. Made me smile :)

I almost gave it a 1 star, thinking it a cuck story, or a cheating story. Glad I read it all the way. 5 stars, the Bear approves. approves. Thanks for a good story.

The BEAR

Great story. Very well written.

Good one.

Ah, to have a love like that...

Great writing!

Don’t write in the present tense. It doesn’t work.

This was totally what erotica is is about. No grossness, just a very erotic little story. 5 stars!🌟

Well done pig, well done!

Bill S.

Brilliant, loved it