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I was suddenly awoken by the cops flipping me over and cuffing me for raping and abusing my wife...I was taken to jail where i was butt raped by the men there when they heard what i had done to my wife. I got what i deserved

Seriously...

amh1970 was right. How anybody thinks this is erotic - other than some perverted teenager - I have no idea

And then my wife chomped down and bit my cock off! Blood gushed from my torn hole and then I felt her nails on my balls. I screamed as she tore my scrotum open and as my ingots fell out she bit them off. Then she fisted me in the ass so deep my intestines popped out my ass.

Why anyone would find this story to anything but bad is beyond me. What could be sexy or entertaining about this? Nothing! No stars for this absolute garbage.

Fit for the toilet and nothing else.

This story was listed under "nonconsensual", were you not aware of this?

It was exactly what I needed

Hey everyone,

Thanks for your comments. Reading them has made me laugh quite a bit. These stories are, infact, just that. I'm not trying to be the next George R R Martin, but stories are mean to be emotive. I don't condone these actions, and I would probably only act out about half this story :) But as one of the earlier comments pointed out. It is labeled as non consent/reluctance, so I'm afraid it won't be a story about unicorns and happy endings.

Thank you for Reading.

I came from reading this...amazing job!

That ending is totally rage bait with how misogynistic and just plain wrong it is.

This is so screwed up an editor would toss it rather than try to fix it. LED ?? WTF is with that that? Each time you needed to say as she lay there, was lying there, as she lay there, etc you said the word, LAD!! When English was glossed over in your school, you were daydreaming, apparently.

Sorry its clearly tagged in non consent section. What did you expect to read.

As for the story itself, while I did notice some grammar errors it was pretty hot.

Kind of wished for the morning after, but not the worst ending.

L A Y NOT LED!!