All Comments on 'Hard Adjustments Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
a rea;listic buildup

what a buildup...sahadowlord.. looks like u shadowed a real mum ... fantastic. immensely enjoyed.. both mum, verbal tirade against Carole on being treated like scum and vaginal tide on smelling her own son,s cum... pls continue

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
Very well written

I liked this story. The buildup was good and it left u wanting more. Looking forward to the next entry.

jwad24jwad24almost 20 years ago
More More More..please

Man..this is one hot story!!! I can not wait to hear what happens next. Please email me at j_wad24@hotmail.com when you finish the next part.

thanks

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
great story

it was good and I like it good going and keep up the good work

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Wow

This is a great beginning to a series. I think these characters were even sexier then the ones from your previous series. I can't wait to read the future chapters. Write soon! I can't wait

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