All Comments on 'Hardscrabble Pt. 02'

Wonderfully written Story! Looking forward to the next phase of their lives.

Thanks for sharing your talent.

Cheers

SAGE

outstanding worth the wait keep creating more

I really enjoyed reading your story which has some historical facts also. Being born and raised in the great state of TEXAS I have been a student of the early days of this state. It is apparent that you have studied some of the history also. Keep up the excellent writing.

Awesome story that is very well written. I look forward to the continuation and hope that it will appear soon! :)

5*

Loved this story, but I hope you end it here. The last paragraph seems foreboding....

Great story, love Western stories! 5 stars.

Don’t make her a whore.

Great story,... Thanks

Thank you for your story. In addition to being a lovely romance, it gave me a chance to look up new words and old songs.

Nice western. I enjoyed it a great deal.

Another wonderful read, very well done and I'm sure it will be read many more times by me.

I loved the story. My only question is from page 2. The diamond ring, was that an engagement ring? Why do I ask? Engagement rings didn't really exist until after WWII. A South African diamond company, De Beers, came up with an advertising slogan to increase diamond sales...A diamond is forever. That was the real birth of engagement rings. Unless my history is off.

Fished in Indianola 55 years ago. Fished and hunted between The Venado and the Port O Connor area and all the way down to the Land Cut. Good memories brought back by this story. I know about where La Salle built a fort up Garcitas Creek. Great story and fascinating area including the history about Shanghai Pierce. Thanks. Could have done without the mysticism but great story.

DC, thanks for the history. I didn’t know those things.

I used the two rings my grandmother wore as inspiration because she said they were passed down from her husband’s grandmother. People were so little back in the early 1800s, I couldn’t get it on my little finger.

Googled La Salle. Apparently they found his fort eventually. It was local lore the landowners had covered it up after finding it to avoid the circus.

Schwanzel, I did too! With my great aunt, who was widely accepted as the best fisherman in Victoria. She even made her own rods!

She was also a good story teller, as were many in her age group, so I was well-steeped in the legends and lore of Indianola before I reached my teens.

I can’t think of the name, but Louis Lamour wrote a book about the Goliad-Beeville area that include a good bit of action in Indianola just before and during the hurricane. Fun read, as are all his books.

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My respect and thanks to the author for providing us with such a well written tale. Another old Texas boy rates this at least a Five. Thank you for sharing!

All of your tales are outstanding. This one I love the best although the west Texas one is a close second. This reads better than the Sacket saga of Louie Lamont. Cannot wait until you continue this one.

5 well deserved stars.

Manipulative can't, Lily. What's worse is when Silas's mother, sister and Gwen give him a piece of their mind, taking the side of skank!! These are all manipulative bitches speaking about love

Gwen and Tillie, two sluts

A very enjoyable read of an excellent western. Look forward to more. Bravos.

What a great story. More would be nice

This is a great tale, well told!

Thank you for another fine one, sir!

Awesome,!

I forgot how wonderful this story was. I'm so very glad I found it again.

Very good, thanks for writing this

Great story. Very entertaining. Thanks.

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More. PlZ

And thank you 4 ur storys