by AutumnWriter
I agree with Jim ''We didn't get to make love tonight but this was better''
It really was.
Thanks
Jim said it all, Hildy is a nice person and that is a lot more important than being beautiful, or having a dynamite body. Looks fade, but the inner person lives on and often only gets better with time.
The story develops the character in the manuscript and deepens them as human beings at the rate their relationship is developing they are leaving behind the normal checkpoints of the mate-hunt.
AW this chapter really showed the kids for who they are. I very much enjoyed it and am proud to be reading an author who has a better sense of how GOOD people can be for once. Thank you.