All Comments on 'Hate You, Want You'

It one of the hotness story in the long time

Love it!

:-)

Might just slip into something more comfortable and read that again. Mmmm

ughhh, so hot. wish something like this would happen to me and my wet, tight boy pussy. FUCK.

Sure it's hot.

But.

Did you want to show how ftm transexuals just need a good fucking to get normal?

Write a story about a lesbian next. Or even a gay guy.

Best story i've read in a while

The sex was hot for sure, but it is also rape. Might want to warn folks up front that you've got a story about non-consentual sex

Totally unrealistic. Some transguys are tops, you know and lots don't like having their genitals touched or fucked

A trans man isn't just a boy with a bonus hole. But nearly every FTM story has to feature a trans man getting screwed like a woman.

This follows the same tedious plot - a man discovers the trans boy's secret and bam! he turns into a subby little cuntboy. Even for a fantasy, it's hard to believe.

How about something with a FTM fucking a guy for once?

Also, totally unrealistic portrayal of the animation/art business. A self-taught artist isn't going to hold their own in the industry.

Disgusting. Rape isn't hot. A little hesitation is gross but navigable but this is horrifying. It belongs in nonconsent.

I'm a transman myself and I enjoyed your story. As a matter of fact, it's always been a fantasy of mine for a man to find out I have a pussy and use it to his advantage in much the same manner .//. I'd love for a guy to do everything Conner is doing to Dave xD Dave isn't being fucked like a woman, he's being fucked like a man -- how is that? because he is one, regardless of gentialia or body parts used. I think you captured that by using male pronouns and using words like "boy toy." This story is not everyone's cup of tea -- every transman is different -- but still good writing. People shouldn't be so easily offended, the story itself itself is like a "fantasy" afterall and there are other transmem who would enjoy it.

This is gonna sound awkward but thanks. After accidentally stumbling upon a dating topic in some forum and reading comments by gay men how they would never sleep with a trans guy cause we dont have real dicks or arent real men, I felt like shit.

This? This was hot and it was nice, in a way, just to feel desirable. So thanks.

as a trans guy (who's admittedly into some kinky shit) this is by far my favorite story i've ever read

As a transguy...this was so fucking hot. The verbal possession and claiming of him, Connor paying attention to his clit and vag and how they act differently, them both getting lost in the act in totally different ways, the way Connor enjoys it more than he lets on, all of it. The oral under the desk made it worse/better in a kinky way, if that makes sense, and was a nice cap-off to this story that could also leave room for a sequel.

And in response to the other comments...yep, in reality it would be horribly creepy and wrong. Which is pretty much exactly what this site is for, since maybe they forget we're literally on literotica, lol. People's fantasies, which include some dark and kinky places, and are even better for it. And if it's not your piece of cake or you want an FTM top story, which would be equally hot, just write and post it. The more hot fiction about (and by) transguys the better.

Nice story, thanks for sharing.

Thanks for posting stuff like this, I don't know if you're cis or trans yourself but this was written well, some terms I wouldn't personally like reading but the way you pieced it together wasn't dehumanizing or invalidating. (I mean, it's a non-consent story, but, if Connor was all "oh you're really just a /girl/" and kept that up, then yeah, invalidating. But he calls him a boy toy. Score.)

If anyone else is reading these comments and interested in writing; take an example from this. Never reference a trans dude as a woman.

My only criticism with this whole story is that you can't just rip a binder off. Like for real, dude, they're not bras, trans people themselves can get a little used to it and find ways of taking them off themselves but it's time consuming, incredibly time consuming at first, and for Connor, well, he might as well give up.

I guess I'll make an account and write a trans guy topping a cis dude B)

I first read this two years ago and I never forgot it. It is written amazingly well, and you did a great job handling the trans aspect of it.

I have read this countless times and it is incredibly hot. I know it is probably designed as a one shot but I would love to read a sequel about what happens to Dave as Connor's quasi unwilling sex toy.

(Also, adding my voice to the chorus of trans men who really appreciate non dysphoria inducing porn)

to everyone complaining about how tHeRe ArE nO sToRiEs WiTh fTm tOpS: nobody is stopping you from writing. Make it yourself.