All Comments on 'Haunting of Palmer Mansion Pt. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Wow!

This story is already starting off incredibly. Will be waiting for the next chapters.

AlwaystabooAlwaystabooalmost 5 years ago
Masterfully crafted

Very fun read that can have so many great picture interactions. The only question is, which family member gets Daniel first?

rawlyrawlsrawlyrawlsalmost 5 years agoAuthor
More on the way

Chapters 1 - 4 are complete. The next chapter drops tomorrow. After that, chapters will arrive about three weeks apart.

If you want to read them sooner, or feel like supporting my writing, you can do that here: https://www.subscribestar.com/rawlyrawls

Thanks for reading!

Sex4lf57Sex4lf57almost 5 years ago

Nice start! Can't wait until chapter two!!

TSreaderTSreaderalmost 5 years ago
Wow!

A great start to this story! Thank you!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Good Start

I liked you story & look forward to the next part's, keep up the good work.

sniffpantiessniffpantiesalmost 5 years ago
Good plot

Awesome start....loving the theme

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Good story

I enjoy your stories, and thank you for your time. I cannot contribute due to being on disability. I hope you are going to continue to post here. Any idea when you may post on (There is Something in the Water)

rawlyrawlsrawlyrawlsalmost 5 years agoAuthor
Thank you

Thank you all for the great feedback. I'm glad you're all enjoying reading this story.

To answer a question, the next Something in the Water chapter is in the review process right now. Sometimes it takes them a few days to review and publish a chapter, sometimes it takes over a week.

ghostless9pmghostless9pmover 4 years ago
Great Stories!

Hey I think you're one of the best writers here. The SITW series is my favortite. Just wanted to say thanks and keep up the good work!

LateStageInfernalismLateStageInfernalismover 4 years ago
Great Start!

I really enjoy the premise and the characters so far. You've done a great job of building the setting and getting that delicious internal conflict going. I'm looking forward to reading more!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
I found your comics in pictures amazing

search with Jdseal comics and fuck they are amazing man,

YourMommysDaddyYourMommysDaddyover 3 years ago
We're off to the races!

Great start. Nice details. Let's go!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Kudos

You are a crafty storyteller , this is a masterpiece ! You’re the epitome of horror/erotica , like a Stephen King of porn literature ! ( And I mean that in a good way ) I have read up to the 21st chapter , as it’s the last one submitted so far , and it has me waiting in impatient anticipation of its final chapters . Your talent is incomparable ! Ironically , the birthing of this perfect brainchild should make you parent of the year ! Lol

mrdata9770mrdata9770about 3 years ago

This narrative is very popular on the wed. I believe this is the fourth or maybe fifth site I've found it on. A sexy horror story with the right blend of more sexy than horror. Reminds me of the soap "Dark Shadows" from the 70s. I'm a fan and I'm happy to see that you have been able to submit a chapter once a month on average. This is a great read. Oh, and I'm also happy to now find that this is not the only narrative you have written. As I said, I'm a fan. Please keep up the great work.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Great chapter, sorry for the question, but does anyone know the name of the author of The Pendent, or where I can find it to read? the story looks similar.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

A fun story. I look forward to the next chapter.

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