All Comments on 'Haunting of Palmer Mansion Pt. 03'

the action between them start to pick up

Absolutely Awsome!!! Can't wait to read the next chapter!!

Great chapter, hoping to see Brittney and her father get in on the action soon.

Very yummy indeed! Thank you!

I like the pace and direction of the story. Will the father and daughter get involved?

Looking forward to the next chapter, thanks for a great wonderful story!!

finished reading the dark stone collection, awesome story. enjoyed immensely.

looking forwards to Haunting of Palmer Mension, please keep up the great work.

Thanks alot :^)

Thank you all for your supportive comments!

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Guys do you know any similar stories to this one and Dark Stone?

I will be glad for any tip :)

I very much enjoy the mixture of Victorian and modern times. It is very satisfying to find a writer that will take their time to allow the situation to evolve.

Please keep the story going.

You have written an amazing piece of literature. I cannot wait for the next few chapters. 5 stars for all the chapters.

I love your use of 19th century dialogue. Feel bad for poor George though. What did he do to deserve his situation. Another 5 Stars!

Poor mummy that wicked boy taking you for a ride. Perhaps next time the ride will be on that monumental tool, but only if you are a very good mummy. Look after each other, I'm sure your reward will be in heaven. Whilst Daniels may well be in Brittney. What a lucky boy. And five stars. Looking forward to the next chapter, fortunately I just have to turn over the page.