All Comments on 'Have a Go'

Thanks for the offering.

this could have been very good. The initial part of the ' reluctant ' seduction was pretty droll and quite sexy. Candi sold herself too cheaply though. I would have enjoyed this much more, if she made the smug but amusing narrator work much harder for his illicit carnal satisfaction. Did the author have a bus to catch ?

I really would have liked to see this go in a noir " The Postman Always Rings Twice " or " Double Iindemnity "vein. Maybe next time.. Perhaps the author will set his sight higher. Woulda, coulda. This could have been good. Very good. Maybe next time.

James the obtuse but forceful husband's character could have been etched deeper. Credit where credit is due though. Ashson can write some smooth talking scoundrels . No doubt about that.

Because that's what all women want isn't it? Only in your fucking stupid dreams you douchebag. Have you even MET a woman? Do you have any idea how they would react if you pulled a stunt like that? You'ld end up in prison with a sex offender status you idiot.

You call this a story, such a weak story line. Just not believable ,the chance of something like this happening is like trying to win the lottery .

Nice erotic story. But Lord.... was right. You should have slowed down during the actual seduction segment. Thanks though for your work.

This is nothing more then the daydream of 30 something who can't seem to get away from moms basement and computer. Obviously written by someone who has no idea how to seduce women or anything about them. It really reads like a 15 year olds idea of what might work. Kinda creepy to be perfectly honest.

What is it with Literotica? Everyday they post this cucky loser humiliation crap and apparently refuse to identify and post the other side favored by many readers. Both Irondragon and Stangstar06 as well as JPG have posted on sol yet nothing here. QHML1 has a LW story dated today on his profile but it is not listed in the days production. Lit your bias is showing. Stop and post everything!

It's because we're trying to get rid of the whining fucking closet-cucks like yourself. So fuck off to sol and stay there.

Hey! Not a bad read. Simple, to the point, reasonably well written and more than a little amusing. Enjoyed the hell out of it.

with his bull in a china shop seduction technique. Ffs! We know when we start one of your stories she's gonna get fucked so pack a little more clay around it dude. 3*

She was a shy cheating whore wife. Enough said.

people just deserve each other

Candi is a perpetual ingenue. I like her and the quickie.

Thanx

Loved it the vivid imagery from the words sparked me intrest but it's missing something

your either lucky or have been set-up..TK U MLJ LV NV

Ashon never wrote a story without a little rape.in it.

What a bunch of wankers. It was a fun little story about a hot sexy wife that was outwitted by a man that could read her. I think it’s great.

Nice story. I love her thinking she has things under control as she gets “talked” out of her clothes. I’ve seen women seemingly unable to put up a defense get taken advantage of by men who get what they came for. It’s exciting to see her weakening and letting him have what he wants. Eventually responding and having an orgasm for him.