All Comments on 'Have You Ever?'

by Colleen Thomas

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AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
so hot!

that was a great story! the build up and the sex were great! Keep up the amazing work!

saw_man1saw_man1over 18 years ago
Eros and Pathos

A very good story. I think I just saw someone come to life.

rgraham666rgraham666over 18 years ago
Lovely

A wonderful 'coming' of age story.

Sweet, romantic and very hot.

Well done.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
good but too short

great story but it ended too soon. wil there a chapter two?

ScribblerosScribblerosover 18 years ago
Colleen writes a good tale.

i have read her stories before and most of them are good. this one is beautiful and its coming after quite some time.

continue writing collen.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Thumbs Up

Beautifully written.

kaytekayteover 18 years ago
Fantastic

You are a splendid writer, thank you. I do love how you describe an orgasm. It is perfect. That is something that I have never been able to do well. You explain so well how women make love. I have had a few bi experiences. It is not something I do on a regular basis. I am primarily het. I did learn though there is quite a difference between the way men and women kiss etc. And I am grateful for that.

I am looking forward to more of your stories.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Should be published in Playboy

Read like a middle aged mans fantasy.

Rudy JamesRudy Jamesover 18 years ago
Heavenly ride...

Sometimes I feel the urge to go to Brazil, have a sex-change and move into one of your stories... cuz it must be great becoming a character you have created.

Thank you for this sweet story, Miss Thomas.

Rudy James, Antwerp - Belgium

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Real life has much to live up to

It's too easy to let life pass by without realizing it. I'm sure it would do all of us a lot of good to do a bit more carpe diem, if only the results were like your stories.

contem2us1contem2us1over 18 years ago
Magic...

You so have a way with grabbing a reader and causing us to wish the story would never end. This story was not only hot, but thought provoking as well. I love your work!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Beautiful!

What a lovely story! I only wish my first experience with a girl (or boy) had been so sweet. Now I must go read everything else you've posted! :)

iraussieguyiraussieguyover 18 years ago
Wonderful!

Wonderful writing as usual, I am in awe of the detailed descriptions of lesbian loving.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
Great

After reading your 5 chapter story, this quick one was a nice change, short and sweet. As always, very nice details and storytelling.

The end line had me laughing, I wonder how her sister responded?

lovercat2942lovercat2942almost 16 years ago
Cute little story

Donna suddenly attacking her sister Janie down south--and Janie pretty much accepting it--is a bit much, but other than that and a tiny bit of contrivance, a nice coming-of-age story about Janie with some wonderful life message. Good, short little read after going through the intense Football Widow and Jefferson series. Again, very believable characters with very real feelings.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
More?

Please, please couldn't we have a sequel? Another day or two in Europe?...and in and out of bed?

TheAbsurd_studentTheAbsurd_studentalmost 14 years ago
Belissimo!

I am in love with this story. This is my favorite. You should write more stories having to do with airports. There's something about them that makes Lesbian stories sexy. You're a beautiful writer. A definite favorite!

lapseofreasonlapseofreasonover 13 years ago

That was awesome. The only thing that would have made it better is if you had gotten the flight attendant involved :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
OMG! So hot! Please please write another in this line!

On a beach during the day

MartinimanMartinimanover 12 years ago
🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟

Fabulous & erotic story! I can only wish you would write more chapters about their time together in Europe & their return to the states!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

I NEVER leave a comment, but this was so well

written, hot, sexy, erotic, soft, romantic all at the same time. I loved it.

Thank you and please keep on writing.

GrrrreatImaginationGrrrreatImaginationabout 12 years ago
I loved this one.

It wrenches my heart that Colleen is gone because her stories have touched my heart -still do. This is a great story with a crystal clear life-lesson. Gifts like this story are one of the best ways people live on in the hearts and minds of others.

Love and prayers for you Colleen.

dgowredgowreabout 11 years ago

Well done Colleen, a real story and so well written. I loved it.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Anonymous

The last part made me lol.

And yush, really great story~

Arago007Arago007over 10 years ago
Wow...

The last line might be the single best sentence I have ever read... And no, I have never, Dammit!

germanchocolate4ugermanchocolate4ualmost 10 years ago
Bravo!

The author, Colleen Thomas has written another well-rounded and developed story with a clever ending. Encore! Ms. Thomas, you have to give us the next installment of this wonderfully erotic story. Please pretty please with brown sugar on top

roveroneroveronealmost 7 years ago
WHEW!

LOVED it...WAY hot.

two enormously likable characters...

5 and def fave story,also author if not already

MarshallaMarshallaover 6 years ago
Very hot ...

... and an excellent last line. Loved it.

But not only the last line. ;-)

Nightwish1977Nightwish19779 months ago

Nice one. The last line was really something..

Roti8211Chanai643Roti8211Chanai6437 months ago

Really good Story!

Great ending!

black75black754 months ago

Love this story. The stewardess somehow raises it to the next level!

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