All Comments on 'He Shot His Sister in the Back'

The best sibling pregnancy story

Boring and stupid at best. I gave it 2 stars just out of pity.

please keep going. eager to read how this goes

Decent story, but more of the start of a soap opera, than eroticism, at least to me.

The wrestling theme really was unnecessary and boring. It added nothing worth while. You should have just focused on the doctor's appointment.

I can't believe the pathetic comments left here by the coward "anonymous". People that have nothing good to say and only want to criticize should NOT me commenting. This was a very well written story and I for one am hoping to see more chapters, like maybe they figure out that they can move away to where nobody knows either of them and raise their child as husband and wife.

Yep, like the story nice and gentle love story not heavy on the sex but romantic. Centering the story around photography was an interesting idea as a catalyst to Steve and Sherry's relationship.

I think it deserves one more chapter just for closure on how they deal with the pregnancy. Do they tell their parents the truth?

You can't just abandon this here, we need to know what happened next - so please, get to it !

Thanks,

Rapier

A final to this series would be really nice.

To AirSearch1, if they moved to Roed Island they could be open about who they are, as it's the only state in which incest isn't a crime. Still can't get married there though.

Good story,

Tanhors and family.