by dragontatto
The suspense is killing me; I really enjoy this story but the time between them is murder. Stil, it is a great storyline.
Love it! The suspense is killing me too! I wonder how both kat and Charles are going to react when the see her father! Ahhhh! So great! Cant wait for the next chapter! Please let it be soon! Thanks
You are juggling several story lines at once, and doing a good job. I was just wondering about Rand and Gracie, knowing she should drop those babies any time now!<br><br>
Okay, the outbreak of chicken pox should alert Kat and Charles that someone has snuck in from Earth right? <br><br>
Great twist re Kat's grandfather (and mother!)
DT, you have a complex story here and it has taken a long
time to bring each character and segment to "Full Vew". Now
you are tieing threads together and throwing in some very unsuspected links that may hold the keys to happiness. I too
long for the next chapter and beyond. THANK YOU for a really GREAT story! (This is a LUCKY 13!!)
...think that someone who had a temper tantrum when she didn't get her way, pulled her stories, left the site, then came back less than a week later but refuses to write for said site should NOT be allowed in the AUTHOR'S HANGOUT? After all, isn't the AUTHOR'S HANGOUT for AUTHOR'S on Literotica? Of which she is not. Thanks for your time.
I wouldn't wish Shingles on an enemy never mind a friendly Venusian! NO..wait a minute.. maybe the anonymous commenter below should go scratch his/her itch somewhere else for a while!
How insulting to come to Dragontatto's story feedback and leave your pander as a comment.
DT, as always I appreciate your attention to detail - I know you're working hard to tie up all the many strands of your story. Thsi chapter felt a little 'condensed' to me, as if you were glossing over some events so you could get onto others. This may have been your intention, in which case I bow to the Author's prerogative.
To Anonymous - with that whiny comment, it's no surprise you are ashamed to put your user name to it. Maybe living in your momma's basement isn't agreeing with you. <br><Br>
Back to the story - I hadn't really thought of shingles as a result of adult chicken pox, but that is one miserable condition to have. Hmmmm, maybe that Venusian dude that got banished could catch a dose of it?
THe story is moving on wonderfully, DT. I can't wait for Kat's grandfather to come and for the babies to be born. ^-^