by luvthex
Great story hope you do more with it . Thanks for the great read .
I liked your story, I just wish you had someone proof read it before you published it.
Great story n- his sister will certainly re-awaken him and hopefully; they be eating each other out, she keeps blowing him and he starts screwing her well. More details would be great. I really feel your story is a "10", thank you.
Do not pay any attention to negative comments unless they are also constructive. I liked the story line and hope to see more chapters soon.
Loved this well written story, so easy to follow and enjoy, to the build up.
A bit surprised by the husbands attitude, but understandable. I really enjoyed this very realistic story, Only saddened when it ended.
Delighted to read the author's post, that , there will be other stories. If this is any indication, those will be well worth the read.
Thanks for the fun.
It is a really good story but it needs more, maybe she could get their sisters involved and one of them is a submissive exhibitionist and she brings her best friend who is also one and he precedes to breed them.
Great story. Loving, caring sister. What a lucky guy. Glad husband understand and approve. Well written. Love to see more of the B&S adventure.