All Comments on 'Heart's Desire'

That was a nice twist. I loved it. Can't wait for another of your stories.

Pelaam, you've done it again! Loved the twist and buildup. I always shiver with excitement when I see you've written another story. Keep up the amazing writing!

but then again I love all your stories! More please :)

very gud, loved it i like all ur stories i think some off your others were better but this one is great keep up the gud work-ShatteredLover

as soon as i saw your name i knew this was the v-day story i wanted to read first. your writting is great and your stories are romantic and sexy as hell. thanks for sharing your tallent.

OMG.. did not expect that twist. I loved the story. Can't wait for your next one.! hopefully it is another silver story b.c i'm just dyien for a new one =D

The quality of your writing is outstanding.

Have you been drinking, Pelaam?

I think its a lovely story, definately an interesting twist on the gods.

I really enjoyed this story. In many stories I just skim the sex parts, I prefer the struggles, romance, and interaction. But this was one of those stories where the sex parts were as interesting as the rest. Wonderful job; this was definitely one of the hottest stories I've read.

Thank you.

this was going to well till you changed there names mid flight and fucked my brain up.? lol

Another touching, wonderfully hot touching, heartwarming story. Welll done.