All Comments on 'Hearts of Warriors Ch. 09'

Keep up the good work :)

This chapter was an amazing read. I kinda feel sorry for elle though. Can't wait for the next chapter!

Yummy, yummy, yummy. I crave each upcoming chapter. This is far worse than when I quit smoking. Is there a lit anonymous support group? I need a sponsor!

yet another terrific chapter was very entertaining and I loved when elle drove Karn across the room he so deserved it.I can hardly wait to see how lily visit goes with her parents it should be interesting to say the least . I am looking forward to the next chapter.

Would I be right if I guessed that Elina is Karn's mate?

As always another wonderful chapter. I'm really this chapter

Sooo happy to see a new chapter, I feel like Christmas came early! :D Can't wait to see Mac and Andrei face off. That should be terribly amusing lol

I was so excited when i saw the new chapter and as usual it was GREAT! Can't wait for the next one!

I have no other words, that's a lie. We both know I always have a lot to say. How you cont. to create what is my all time Fav story/series I'll never know. Your imagination is utterly amazing. I just can't say enough about your ability to bring forth such an amazing group of characters.

And those characters! Who wasn't involved in this chapter? From Annie admitting to keeping a secret. And Rafe who had to deal w/not only the secret Annie kept but everything else that happened. What about Lacey and Loretta helping to keep their mates calm during the Pack meeting. And poor Ash, with everything she has been thru to now feel she's loosing her son. Thank you Nors for being there. Liam seems to have found a place where he's not over run w/others emotions. Poor Elina has lost her cousin who is so much a part of her. Kallum is just Kallum. His word is trusted w/o question for he a way about him. I guess it's his Alpha coming thru. I like that Kothari was told he must first find out who he is before he will even be consider for acceptance by the Praetorian. And Karn not taking any shit from anyone, well anyone but Elina. And we can't forget Lily and Mac. I think they have quite an adventure ahead of them as they try and work things out between themselves.

Hey Jaz I maybe a novelist after all, just look at the length of my comments. As always I thank you for sharing your story. You have no idea the hours of pleasure your story has given me. Well not just this story, everything you have written should be included. I eagerly await your next chapter to see what happens when Andrei hopefully w/Loretta met Lily and Mac.

Jazz your nothing short of Amazing, i cant wait to see Mac and Andre meet again and also Elle and karn that gonna make for more great reading yayy!

Another great Chapter. Thankyou

Madame Jaz as usual you just blew my mind..... And true to charachter you have left me biting my nails for the next part of the story.... Love your

brain!

When you don't know how to control the flow of emotions coming at you or worse, they follow and find a home with you, it makes you afraid to step outside and be around other people. The one thing I had to learn when I started working in the Retail industry is how to create a energy channel which allowed people's emotions to flow around, then down into the earth to be sent. I still spend a lot of time at home strengthening shields, but it allows for a person to have a 'normal' life ;)

By the way...sorry to go off subject..can't wait to see what happens when they go home!

I like Korthari a lot. I am very curious about his story. Rest of the story was awesome as well, please keep it coming soon

More!!!!

... as I've been pining slightly ;)

What a chapter; you've opened up so many more possible stories here - it's all sort of spiralling out into other future tales (I hope).

I just love the way you write - there are so many characters I want to know more about. Just this chapter has captured our attention around Liam, Elina and Kothari. The hints you gave of their characters was so well described, so succinctly. And what was that with the scene between Kothari, Daria and Cassie? (hope I've got their names right..) Interesting.

I guess that Liam is first on the list now; I can't wait!

Also, just to say, I'm loving the love between Lily and Mac too. Fiery to say the least. I don't know how much further this particular tale has to go, but I'm really looking forward to Mac meeting Andrei ;)

Take care

F

Well this chapter was well worth the wait for it!!! It was wonderful to get updates on more of the characters from the pack, not to mention learn a bit more about the hybrid children. I can't wait to see how you plan to develop the relationship between Karn and Elina. I was wondering who you were going to pair him up with. I suspected he was going to find his mate among the pack. I'm also intrigued by the perceived animosity between Kothi and Alexei's daughters. I'm wondering if that has anything to do with his attitude problem. I can't wait to see what happens when Lily and Mac arrive, and he's introduced not only to the in-laws but the whole pack!!! Please update again soon!!!

I'm so glad you are writing more about Liam, for some reason I can't explain he is my favorite. If he were real I would want to wrap my arms around him and just hug and not let go. You characters are all amazing and I'm now a bit curious about Kothari

great and engrossing, always makes me wish the things where longer

But we all know she has many, many ALTS.

Absolutely superb.

Well done Jazz!

well worth the wait . . . kept reading on to see the meeting you have planned for Andrei and Mac. I will have to wait until the next chapter, but your build-up is wondeful. Love the possibilities for Karn & Elle.

I LOVE your stories and can't wait for the next chapter to come out soon.

it's nice to see these chapters and rereading them. sighs... mac....more sighs

anytime

anyday

anywhere

@anon accusing jazz of having alts : crawl back under the rock you came from, if you are so sure of that post under a name yourself and ask laurel to verify her "alts" you'll only be told jazz has no alts, just a lot of fans that love her writing and will wait weeks, months, years for an update!

so if you don't have anything sensible to say about the story, as i said, crawl back under that rock of yours.

After the last chapters, I kinda thought Brandon would be Elinas mate with the whole opposites thing, but it seems Karn's got the job now. ;-)

I loved it! I don't agree with Donalde I don't think Karn deserved the punch, he told her the truth only after she started ranting at how he had no clue on how she was needed to help Liam. She is the one in the wrong here.

I am so glad Liam is so happy and will be able to learn to block better thanks to Karn. Ash and Nors will be thrilled to find that Liam is happy where he is.

I think Kothari will be more powerful than everyone when you look at who his parents are how could he not be.

His father is over 6,000 years old making him the most powerful vamp around second to none (yes I know Caleb is old but Guard sired him so he is older physically) and his mother being the first of her kind is also extremely powerful. We know he is powerful and intelligent and keeps most of his abilities secret. I look forward to seeing just how he turns out.

I had a feeling you would stop there Jaz, making us wait for who knows how long for the meeting between Mac and Andrei. Sigh, I will attempt to wait with some degree of patience.

More, yeah! I kept checking back and finally ended up re-reading When World's Collide and A Long Walk Home. I'll re-read the first two eventually, but WWC was the one I started with originally and I like Rafe and Lacey. I'm going to have to start over with this one too...I feel like I'm forgetting a bunch of stuff, lol.

I really hope Liam finds a mate...then again, I'm sure you've already got all this planned out and just sit and chuckle at our speculations.

^_^

Jaz.......

As I have said time and time again......I am one of your many "ride or die" fans. Just as long as you keep doing that thing you do oh so well, I will be one of the many who will patiently (sometimes) keep waiting.

Furthermore......to all of the trifling "anonymous" individuals who continuously hate on my girl Jaz but for some inexplicable reason insist on reading and rereading every last one of her stories......you have my permission to suck a "fat" one.

Peace!

I ran out of new stories that interested me. So went back to some of your older romance stories because I love your writing style. Was in the middle of 'Art of Seduction' when I saw you had posted your next installment. Needless to say, set 'AS' down so I could read this chapter. I really enjoy your writing. Thank you for sharing.

I have been constantly checking to see if you have updated.. AMAZING!!! i love your work!! you've got me hooked!!! keep it up!!

I dutifully check the new lists every morning, waiting to see if you post anything new. I was late to work because I couldn't close the window and bookmark where I left off. Not regretting it at all. Your story is just fabulous!

It took a long time for this piece to come out but its worth waiting for, u truly are an amazing author.Thanks for the stories.

Amazing, as usual. U rock:)

Give me MORE, damn you!

As always!

Loved and was touched when Liam finally feels a bit of peace! Maybe now he can truly live and move on too!

And can't wait for the Karn and Eliana story! Next? It'll be one smokin' hot one! ;) talk about attitude!

I'm so happy this finally updated! Loved this chapter, I was glad to see Liam join them! More soon!

Yup, always worth the wait. Always has me smiling. Thank you, Jaz.

I put off reading the new chapter for 24hours, but couldnt wait any longer. I slowed down how fast i read and made myself go away and do something before i 'turned the page' each time, i even read it over again once i got to the end, but sadly i ran out of text before i ran out of interest again, lol.

Its a fantastic chapter jaz, more so because of the wait maybe! Thank you for reintroducing us to each of the varcolac, i think i have everyone worked out now :) Hope you, like Lilly, are feeling more at peace now and thanks, as always, for sharing you stories :) FR

Love this entire story. Wonderful!

I can't wait for Kothari's story! Gosh he's sexy. I have a feeling his story will be loads of fun. And loads of fiery scenes too. Anyway, loving Mac and Lily's story. You manage to turn a complete asshole into a loving mate in one night very skillfully. You didn't rush his change and you didn't make seem as though his whole personality changed just by mating with lily. That is a skill within itself. Very well written story. Please post then next one soon, I need my jaz fix. :)

So happy that this story has finally been continued! Ive read this whole series one after the other and finally caught up with you so it was horrible having to wait for this one but definitely worth it! Please don't leave so long till the next chapter!

Elina and Karn's fiery tension rocks! Can't wait to see what's up between Kothari & the blonde Romanov girls! Love your marvellousness Ms Jaz! Love it!

ITS AMAZING HOW YOU WRITE AND TWISTING THE PLOT OF THE STORY..LOOKING FORWARD TO CHAPTER 10 AND MANY MORE HOPE IT WILL BE POSTED SOON... CONGRATS..

Am loving this story, read alwh first, found out there was lots more to read, did so in the correct order this time and all i can say is... You are taking my breath away with each chapter. I laugh, cry, worry and simply can not stop reading. Keep up the great work.

A dutch jazzaddict ;)

just as i was so thrilled, and happy you updated, and so ready for Mac to met Lily's dad, bam end of chapter. UGH!!! plz for the love of anything holy update soon! :D

i waited and waited for your update and boy o boy was it worth it!!!!!!!!!!.love where it is going and if taking so long bring such long chapter pls take your time....

I'm always left wanting more. It's a talent! Looking forward to the next chapter!

You've turned me into an absolute wreck this last month, every day checking, everyday - nuh fing, every day checking, everyday ....u see where I'm going. And finally, the most important reason I keep stalking this site has posted a new chapter. I almost p"£$ myself when I saw your update. Sorry I'm not on twitter so I don't know what's going on not until u update here. Anywho, this is me doing a little Jaz dance when u posted, thank you lady. Someone said this is christmas come early???? I tell you, it's christmas, new year, valentines day next year, my bday.... come very early. The story was absolutely phenomenal. I love the interaction and I'm quite intrigued about Kothi, more...more.....more...the people need?????? MORE. Please don't wait so long between updates. I a m b e g g i n g y o u! Two posts above mentioned he/she don't mind waiting if the waiting means longer stories. The person should read all the other stories, your stories were normally longer before. Then you switched.....am enjoying the 4 pages Jaz, keep it up! By the way, congrats on all the prizes you've picked up in the competitions!!!! Keep up the good work.

I somehow manage to simultaneously hate and love this story... I hate it because there's never enough, but I can't hate it because it's awesome! I'm also not a fan of the delays between posting, but I survive. Sort of.

Kothi has me curious, as do Elle and Karn. There's gonna be all kind of fireworks and fun!

In short... More please!

I look at your index and see 94 stories in 648 days, you average a story every 6.9 days. So fellow readers give Jaz a break, express support, share constructive criticisms and give thanks for her prolific generosity, imagination and talent.

I love seeing the development of the Varcolac and the impact on those around them. Another great chapter.

I always love your stories, but I really hope you were trying to go for Karn being way over the top, as in he jumped over the line from tough love to mentally abusive. What he said to her was really cruel and in a situation that is so unhealthy (and co-dependent) and with a person so close to breaking, I would consider that 100% mental abuse. There is no way parents who had already let the situation get so bad wouldn't have stepped in at that point either. It seemed like you were setting them up for their own story at some point, but if that is so then I hope you address this.

Anyways it was a good story, but that part put a really bad taste in my mouth.

I had to laugh so hard when I read through some of the other comments prior to writing my own only to find they ALL are exactly what I wanted to pass along.

As usual your latest chapter has left me feeling a whole mix bag of emotions and the constant craving for more!

loved it.. as always.. shared on facebook.. and now following you on twitter.. not that i get on that often.

what can i say.. It was interesting for Karn to make the choice of Liam.. and to hear he's also an empath.. but Elina's showdown was hilarious.. sparks are sure gonna fly when those to meet.

So excited you updated!!!

Lovely, positive and good. Thank you.

Read your comment what a load of.....

Very well written, moved the story along nicely, I'll be looking forward to the next whenever the muse allows.

or should I say apples. From Andrei's girls using that ever potent little red dress to show their men who is ultimately in charge( not sure if that was intentional but it was not lost on me), to Freya part two (protective and nurturing but ready to unleash a world of hurt should you cross her). Here I thought Kothari was going to be the loose cannon given his lineage, potentially limitless power that he alone would have to learn to cope with, and seemingly self imposed exile from the group. I've been dying to see what you have planned for him. I suspect a reluctant mate in one of the twins maybe? I was expecting Brandon to be the one to find his mate among the Varcolac (then again there is another twin) but leave it to you to throw in a curveball in the way of Elina and Karn. The revelation of Karns empathic ability would explain his um...ever charming personality. As soon as he lets his guard down around her and she realizes he was right then the real fun begins.

Since I've been going through your list of recommendations the wait doesn't feel as long I've just finished reading ceeder and mokkelke (which is my next new chp stop) and noticed that they are part of "the guild" as well. Would you mind sending some more guild author names apparently you guys know where all the extraordinarily talented ones are. An absolute pleasure as always and congratulations on Readers Choice Awards you deserve them.

Karn put things into a perspective that no one else saw. And he is so obviously Elina's mate. I can't wait to see what happens there. Great writing. It flowed so well that it was over before I knew it!

I might have missed it before, because I was imagining Karn to look like that of a middle-aged man, but then he is a vampire, so he must also be hot, and this chapter made me realize it. Elina being Karn's mate is so totally unexpected. I'm worried about Kothari though, and his reaction to Alexei's girls, and for a moment there, I thought of him as an antagonist, but surely, you won't do that right? I am soo gonna wait for his story... (please write his!)

This chapter opened up so many possibilities for up and coming new stories and matings! It was so good but left me with the predominant sense of just not having enough- always wanting more. It's torture and sweet bliss - you are amazing!

PS- cannot wait for you to hint at who kallum's mate might be- He is so hot and I totally love him!

I like the story, but I'm stuggling to keep all the names and relationships straight. It borders on work, however, I think it's worth the effort! Well done none the less...keep em coming!!

one of the best writers ever on Lit. And I do not say that lightly having read hundreds of stories by dozens of authors.

you have the ability to create characters so well and seamlessly introduce them to the story line on a continuous basis. over 8 thousand views says it all.

Go get published! you deserve the cash as well as the applause.

I read the entire saga from begining to end twice and I still can't get enough!

just one comment. if and when you write Elina's story i will lose all respect for you if you make her a sheltered virgin like lily. otherwise i love your stories.

I am thankful that you write such good and intriguing stories. I would be really really thankful if you would post the next chapter....(:

Have a great Thanksgiving Jaz.

Mike from Texas.

I can officially say that I'm a huge HUGE fan as of right now. I love it and I can't get enough!

The character development and continuity of your plot is fantastic, even though the cast of characters is so much larger now. Each series gets better than the last, and you balance the erotic nature of the romances well with accelerated plot lines and action. Very impressive. I have to say, of all the Vârcolac, I honestly cannot wait to learn more about Kothari- the mystery and conflicted nature he seems to inherently have are intriguing to say the least.

I beg you, finish off this story. It's just too good. I have read all the stories at least 3 times. This entire story should have been made into a book or a movie. So please give us Andrei's reaction to Lily coming home, Lily getting pregnant, Karn mating with Elina, Kothari falling in love and maybe even Annie getting pregnant.......xxx Mel

When are Karn and Elle going to become mates?

Okay I just want to say, I am a Jaz Junkie! I love your work and especially this saga, I just finished reading it through for the 8th time last night, in about 3 days. I just want to give an idea; take it, leave it. I just want to put it out there. There haven't been any humans introduced in a while... What happens when a Varcolac's -cough, cough Kothari- mate is a human? Possibly one that looks at his sunglasses and cold demeanor and laughs in his face, in a "do you really think I don't see through your bullshit?" kind of way? If you like it, use it (and name her Madison, just kidding... Well sort of.) keep it up and I'll read more next year! Lots of love!

amb<3

Elina is my favorite character, Freya and Dayton are my favorite couple so I was anxious to find out what their daughter would be like, and I love the way she is. My favorite part of this chapter was when Karn was seriously hurting her, and she responded with a punch, ha, it was precious. I really want to you to write her story now, but no, you had to cut if off with Pietro and all the action going on on the other side of the world. Back to Elina, she is the perfect mixture of fragility, but she's also strong and selfless for giving so much to Liam, even if it did end up hurting him. I'd like to see some more explosive moments with her and Karn, but I'd also like to see a little bit of some intimacy with the two. Oh, and Kothari, what is up with this guy and the twins? I like how you showed some of his personality, but still kept it mysterious, I guess Lila is okay, and so is Mac, though it will be interesting when he meets Andrei... Give Kallum a mate, but not too soon while all of this action-stuff is happening. I almost didn't read this story because I loved A Long Walk Home so much, I though Lila and Mac's relationship was way to fiery for my taste, and it kind of is, but that's the way they are. So it's fine. Great Job, you're an excellent writer and I love all of your stories. Get the 12th chapter out soon!!!!!!!!

U got me interested in kathori and the twins what's the deal between the three of them? And can't wait to read the mating between Karm and Elle and as for lily and macs relationship I don't think it's too fiery I love it my kind of man (blushes) I kinda wish I was lily

...for Kal and Kothi and their stories. Lily and Mac are kinda boring after reading about Dayton and Freya ;)

Oh Jaz Jaz Jaz! You are so delightful! I know real life has to be lived but please write at least once a week! You have us hooked and we are addicts for your writing! So you've only yourself to blame if we whine and moan for more more more :) You're that outstanding!

I'm guessing that Brandon is a mate to one of the sisters

you are one of the most talented writers i have read in a very long time.I have read your bio and have surmised that you are british or irish.I am american and some of your sayings tell me this is so.I think you are a beatiful lady.I have also surmised that

you are in a romantic time of your life.that is why your chapters are taking more time.

please keep up your great stories.I hate so badly if you would quit writing.Ron from the USA. 146d

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Do you not get bored of hearing how talented you are, how amazing your writing is, how awesome your characters and emotion is in your writing. . . .

I sure as anything don't get bored of reading it.

Reading this series for the third time and loving it still.

<3

Can't wait for Elle's turn and so happy that Liam get his first :) he needed it.

'His lack of concern was evident and she shook her head in exasperation and turned back to Liam who was watching the exchange with a smile on his face.

"You're so different here, Lily," he said in an awed tone. "It's like you're truly alive. I can feel your happiness. It's so radiant, so beautiful it makes me want to start smiling and never stop."

I just sobbed.

You really are an amazing author Jaz

Elina & Karn, huh? I'm looking forward to their story! Nice first meeting! I love the part where Freya's says "that's my daughter." It definitely made me laugh. I've re-read your whole series while waiting on the next Tears chapter. I'm glad to have read this one again, though. I somehow missed certain things in this one. Like Pietro, and how that whole story works into Tears. I had forgotten a lot of it. I'm happy Liam is more relaxed. I always picture him as that guy Zack Addy from the tv show Bones, instead of like Nors. Oh well! Love your work, as always! :)

Please please delve into their story.

I'm starting to think that for the Vârcolac, having a blood family bond is a protection, a way to adapt better despite their "particularly". The most stable Vârcolac seems to be Cassia and Dara, that have cousins from Alexei's and Cedar's sides. Elina is lucky to have cousins from both sides too, it gives her the strength for her heartbreaking mission to shield Liam. On the opposite, Liam has only Elina, and Kothari has... nobody.

Wonderful tale, excellently told. Intriguing how so many of the comments internalize and identify with your characters. Absolutely stellar, you have an incredible talent, thank you for sharing. Easy 5🌟’s