All Comments on 'Heather Finds the Cougar within Her'

Excellent, I wonder if there'll be more of Josh and Heather; not marriage but an affair that runs it's course while Josh is at university / college.

Hopefully you write a follow up chapter, where Heather explores her submissive side not just with Josh but maybe introduce another 19 yr old. Well, Heather has developed an eye for youthful opportunity.

I gave this story five stars because it was well written and well paced. I hesitated for awhile though, because of one thing: you kept **telling** us how much sexual tension there was between Heather and Josh. You didn't need to tell us there was sexual tension because you were showing us. I know you've published a huge number of stories on this site; you maybe you don't need any concrit but here it is. I would suggest you delete all statements about the sexual tension and then re-read the story. I bet the story is even more powerful. Just a suggestion, of course. Apologies if I'm coming across as being condescending.

Not one of your best...three stars.

Nice and sexy, liked it. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

Please say there is a next chapter! So much to explore.

Very erotic storey, your stories are great. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

Oh man!!! Great story. Looking forward to part two.

Love how you built the characters, nicely done.

YESSSSS!

Hot MILF sex, ain't nuttin better. 5 stars, and hope there is more to cum.

The third person aspect didn’t work for me personally, I feel you write better in the first person. Whilst the story and the slower start were good, the writing felt stilted and awkward. 3* from me I’m afraid.