All Comments on 'Heather's Bus Journey Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
This made me so wet

This story got me so horny heather’s a little slut who needs to be punished, just like me ;)

entemeentemeover 6 years ago
Lovely story

Please continue it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Absurd

Absurd

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
I liked it

It's a good story but needs more development as it covers too much too quickly. As you say writing these stories is harder than it looks.

rodryder44rodryder44over 3 years ago

Heather had to had practice with something down her throat to give the old guy such a good blow job. I wonder if her uncle did teach her. There is so much drama in the one-page chapters. Naturally, Heather isn't on the pill.

tomthumpertomthumper3 days ago

God, so fucking hot Heather! It's not your fault you turned slut so quickly, that mean old man was so good at feeding you his big juicy tasty dick.

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Hi. I like to read stories a lot. It's fun! Now I'm going to try to write stories too. I know it's not easy to do but I'll try my best.

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