All Comments on 'Heather's Bus Journey Ch. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

Very enjoyable story so far...keep it up

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
oh no

first 2 chapters were great, quirky and anew angle but now you are going the sadistic path and it becomes just like hundreds of others.

HeatherLaneHeatherLaneover 6 years agoAuthor
Oh No Don't worry

Hi. Thanks for your comment. Don't worry, as soon as I have time to write Chapter 4 I will have Heather escape and continue her adventures without venturing into bdsm. If you have any story ideas for me to write then please send me an e-mail. Love from, Heather

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Love it!

Hi Heather!!

I really enjoy your stories! It's hot with the humiliation ;) .

Personally, I'm ok if the story does take a BDSM path.. but I would want you to keep the Non-Con ;). I'm looking forward to the new chapter!!

-Innocent Venus

airesseekingairesseekingalmost 4 years ago
so naughty

Love your stories. Innocence seduced is the sexiest. Please write more

rodryder44rodryder44over 3 years ago

Heather's round ass is noted, it is truly a fine asset. She can rub her clit on the bar stool until he returns. Chapters are too short.

tomthumpertomthumper3 days ago

Poor little Heather, you are in such trouble, the worst thing is that you are enjoying it so much! 😍

No, actually that is the best thing, sweetie, you love being the whore against your will and it is so hot to read about.

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Hi. I like to read stories a lot. It's fun! Now I'm going to try to write stories too. I know it's not easy to do but I'll try my best.

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