All Comments on 'Heaven or Hell'

by The_Technician

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

While the attempt to make it dreamlike was technically well executed, just as with dreams a conclusion is much to be preferred.

DevilbobyDevilbobyalmost 2 years ago

I just burnt the last two slices of bread in my toaster. Heaven or hell. Interesting.

lthomelthome2 months ago

It's a great story. The idea of being restrained like this and then caught is so delicious. You should continue the story. I would love to see what her new mistress has planned for her.

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I was born in the Midwest, but have traveled extensively throughout the United States and Canada. Currently I am full-time camping throughout the United States and Canada and spending my time writing for both fun and profit. Books with longer stories such as the kind posted on...