All Comments on 'Heavenly Love Ch. 03'

Great story. Can hardly wait for the next installment.

Good story, but no incest - yet...

Lukas

Impatiently waiting for the next installment. Please don't keep us waiting too long.

I love the slow build up of your story, I love a wellwritten erotic story, stroke stories are not for me.

You are doing fine at present, and I am keen to see the following chapters. Thankyou very much so far.

it's like the middle book of Lord of the Rings. A lot of movement, but no real delivery. It's clearly written to bridge something in the past to something in the future. Only here, the last two chapters really don't go anywhere and the length truly isn't justified by the content. (Just being honest. You do want to become a better writer, right?)

"I think you like a good cleavage."

"What is that?"

Is the son slow in the head? Is this why it's taking so long?