All Comments on 'Heavenly Mother'

Hey are u a Indian in SA ? The story is excellent. Expecting more from you....

The author must be an Indian. What's the big deal abt it, huh? The story is rocking...that's it. I'm an Indian too.

Most son's would have given up on this mother and be left out in the cold. This cobra kept it up and hung around until he took matters into his own hands. I wonder how many other mothers would eventually give in to their son's repeated advances. Sadly enough an example of No sometimes meaning yes. Would like to see a follow up story to see how this has changed their relationship. Does she become a cum slut?

Well written; the dialogue and the suspense, the details and the flow, all work so well!

Well done!

great build up, and an even better orgasm! erm... speaking for myself ;) very well-written!

Very hot story.Keep up the good work, hope to see more of your work...

Xyster is a master story teller.I have been reading Incest stories on the net for the last 5 years, so far I have not come across any writer who can be compared to Xyster. She has the Gift of story telling. Personally I dont like the Mother Son Incest due to many reasons but Xyster's writing is so convincing that she even made me believe in the situation.The way she has developed the whole story is incredible. Unfortunately most of the popular stories are quick suck and fuck stories lacking emotions, justification and guilt associated with the Incest. Only Xyster provides due process and justifications to all the ingredients required in such situations. It is a great story by a really talented writer.

Very Beautiful.

Haven't read a good story like this one in a long time. You write extremely well.

Really well written, arousing and wonderfully graphic. Keep up the good work; soon please. :)

An excellent and masterly treatment to a difficult subject.Self justification and mutual affection sheds off the initial guilt so naturally and so completely that it would be immensely rousing to listen to the follow up on this story from the master story teller herself. The mere imagination of how it would have started the next time sends shivers up my spine.

Xyster, please continue this piece of literature and don't end the srory yet. I know you will listen to me and do as I say and soon. Annabel

I beleave that u r from india. I cummed so much. i made my pants also wet. OO KEEP UP THE WORK. i was licking my pussy touched wet hands while reading the story

wow,i had a hell of a cum reading your story.keep dishing out such god stuff so we fans can have more sweet orgasms.

xyster rules.

This is a superb story. I like incest, but I am now having incest affair in my family. Thnks for the story. my mail id is [tintin4me@rediffmail.com]

this story reminds me of my own experience. just like in the story, i once slept wid my mom and got to touch her pussy. but couldn't get farther than that. good story... and good memories...

Very nice story....The author took much strain to write this wonderful story

Very Good story.Keep up the good work

story is not so hot. mothers age and complete naked body not to be shown. mothers naked body and her asset is so importent in mom son story, specially moms naked buttock. son should be strip to his mother completely nude and do some anal love like kiss moms ass cheeks or toung moms anus. there are some boring passege too in this story, conversation should be more between them. many time moms buttock has to appear but clothed, son should be made her complete nude. indian middle age women have true motherly beauty but every mother is a woman too, they need some physical enjoy. i know some of indian teenage boy who did spy on their mother while mom bathing even i once accidently saw my mother(48) when she changing but not nude, a white bra and panty she was on. Wow, what a body........

I have sex with my mother and i am from kolkata,india.....if anyone wants to talk about incest....he can chat with me at saikatanwarsadi@yahoo.com

superbly hot and adventurous story.!!!!!!!

It's wonderful to know that so many boys in India are getting their big brown prick up their own mother's cunt and blowing their brimming brown balls up the same cunt they came out of. Should be a lesson to lots of American boys who'd love to shoot their creamy semen up between their mother's legs but are too shy to try it. Come on, guys. Your fat white (or black) cock deserves to be surrounded by your mother's warm wet mommy-twat as much as the pricks of these Indian guys. You've heard the saying, "A mother's twat is her son's playground," right? Go make some big puddles in your own personal playground. Mom'll love you all the more for it.

xyster, you do it so well. Strictly a super special.

The premise for them sharing a bed was a classic one and started well, then it fell into being just like any of several thousand similar Indian mother-son fantasies on the net. Not your best work by a long chalk. Both mother and son were simple mannequins here as you never built them up first as real people. Just using the taboo trigger words is not enough to make it erotic. It's just another stroke off story.

for more than five years when browsing literotica always pay respect to heavenly mother again and again. from now on i have to read again and again the comment from Anonymous/07/22/13. it is at the same level and of course could be xyster.

Sir,

You have very effective way of describing tale. F.E. :----- There was a common denominator to both incidents. His penis had been wedged in her ass. This changed things a little. It was no longer a mother in bed with her son. It was Kalpana in bed with Nitin with a penis. Nitin was no longer her innocent little boy. He was a man with a penis. She didn't know how to deal with the issue. She could no longer hug him or cuddle with him like she used to. He had a penis.

^^^ this is so realistic that it seems almost live reporting...

another admiring thing is Mother never agree yet not fighting yet not surrendering to lust yet not non cooperating yet....yet...yet.... this lots of YET makes story very different...

Hat's off --

... very rarely do we see so many good comments. I agree with at least 20 out of 24 comments.

I totally had the hots for my mother till i was about 28. I was infatuated with her body. I loved her as a mother and as a woman i want to worship, caress, kiss & fuck. Mom was constantly in my day dreams... which never came true.

I believe i had what was called Oedipus Complex.

Wow, you expressed forbidden sex in such an obstinate way, slow poison of temptations were narrated of denial and confession between two eternal bodies admiring the unknown black caves of seduction amd tranquility. Sexuality is a work of art and you have painted the hot rainbow...

Bravo.. you have excellent skills in story telling.. esp.. incest ones..

Mom son is very common & happening everywhere.

Did the mother get pregnant by her son?

I hope Nitin impregnated his mom that night.

Beautiful and sexy. Being matherchod (mother fucker is dream of every man.

The best part is that the mother is half resistent and half convincing लेकिन मां अपने बेटे को मना नहीं कर पा रही है क्योंकि वह स्वयं भी अपने बेटे के साथ संभोग करने के लिए इतना भरी बैठी है कि संभोग के चरम बिंदु तक पहुंचने के बाद

what a story very beautifully narrated, the emotions and actions well described eventually resulting in good climax and a good story. keep up the good work. hoping for more stories in future by the writer. keep it up

Wonderfully written story. Love the realistic conflict the mother is experiencing. It really makes the forbidden that much hotter.