All Comments on 'Held Together with Mom'

Special thanks to RogerP, AdrienneL, LeaP and PlatinumPink for giving this story edits.

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always appreciated,

Heyall

I loved it, it would be great for more chapters.

As always - your stories are paced just right - perfect

No more than that is necessary. Awesome work

Really enjoyed it. Thank you. Wild bushy pubic hair would have made it perfect.

Pure love story. Love when intellectuals have incest.

Would as always be great if you continued the story but nonetheless perfect

This was insanely erotic. Another chapter is definitely deserved.

HeyAll,

I always love your stories. Thank you for another great one! Very well done.

Just keep it going for the sake of art of course.......

There has to be a part two , where they do it again , as always great writing !

I agree... There has to be a part two , where they do it again 

"Just keep it going for the sake of art of course......."

And the charity as well. Never forget the charity!

Nice build-up, tension, climax, and denouement, and I agree with other comments that we need more stories from/about this lovely couple!

Will be reading more of your stuff for sure!

so hot,there must be a second encounter! please

More, please!

Please write a follow up to this story.

There must be more because of your build up of the characters which was fantastic and loving

Part two pleasec

Another great story - thanks

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Please another chapter or two....

An interesting way to get into mums pants. A few more chapters of how the relationship develops would be a good read. thank you.

I can not believe I had a boner from start to finish, a good storyline too.

Giavanna is right, "Such a beautiful expression of love."

More Please . Very good story . Can not wait to read more

Encore!

What happened that evening?

And after dinner with Gia?

Fantastic story. Would be nice it could be true.

Looking forward to a follow-up!!

Deserves 6 stars

Continue this relationship including Giavanna.

I would have liked it better had Gia asked them to 'Hold' the pose before his dick enters his mother.

Artistically that would be creative for Gia to capture and she could capture the sensuousness as well as the desire.

and then

With fatigue of holding it just above the dick, she would gradually collapse and embed on his dick.

That would leave him longing for longer and her more fluid.

With each inch going in, both resisting the entry but gravity and fatigue doing the job.

it would be oh so cool (or hot)!

Very sexy! The initial premise was perhaps a little hard to believe but that's true of most erotic stories. Well written and an easy read, I enjoyed it immensely. Thank you!

good one, thanks.

As the other guy said, the premise is hard to believe, but that's true of any incest story. What I love is that it was both erotic and stayed true to its premise. Well done.

I'd give it more then 5 stars if possible. Amazing.

Brilliant writing. Makes me wish for a sequel.

written with a passion and sequence was great

I'm glad to hear this story honestly.

I really enjoyed this story, just wish it was my cock inside this sexy mother. The painting was a nice addition. Great work!! Keep it up!!!

Exceptionally painted, the story was of the highest calibur.Your brush strokes and the blending of your colors,made the quality undeniable.Bravo and i commend you and your work.You're truely an artist of the pen.Thank you. SLR Oregon

Great writing, and awesome fantasy! Had me really hard the entire time!

Loved it! Great flow and such vivid pictures 'painted' of the participants and location.

Awesome!

Beautifully told! I enjoyed it al, everything! Please please write more stories ☺

im hoping for another chapter so we know what happened for the rest of the trip and how the painting turned out.

Oh, we gotta hear more about Helen and Giavanna getting together to make "art"! Or other times she got family members to pose nude for paintings and sculptures, or anything with her own family.

Thanks for another enjoyable story.

Your readers ask for more. I propose we all write a story using your theme - a couple posing for art class. i'll post a story about Brenda and Gavin and their art class adventure in the Nude Day contest. Join me!

Great introduction and build up to a superb climax, in every sense.

I hope they developed their sexual relationship, there's a special relationship between son and mother, especially when they're fucking.

Can we assume he will taking his Masters at Oxford?

Hope to read more of this story.

Hope there is more?

I wish that was me I don't think I could have held it together so calmly. I wonder if they had another episode together if so please write about it.

it was a nice story I would love to read next part of it with such adventure

So many of us dream of having our cocks in our mothers' pussys. Thanks for sharing your vision!

This deserves a follow up perhaps a 3 some with Girvanna my minds active after reading this

Now that the door has been opened?

One of the best stories I've ever read!

A continuation would be perfect. I loved it. I would love to read more between the two.

Great story, loved the build up but neither of them ever really reveal their love/lust feelings and the mother never lets go enough to climax. It all seemed to happen under the pretense of having to satisfy the son's erection. The mother is clearly aroused but only let's go enough to take care of his needs. I was a little let down by that. It would be hotter is she couldn't resist her needs too.

They say it isn't allowed (incest) but in the Roman and Greek times, families got together to perpetuate the family name and lineage.

But to do it for love's sake - WOW!

Keep up the good work...

In a perfect incest story, the mother's & son's characters are skillfully brought into an unusual situation where the improbable becomes the order of the day! This story passed that litmus test with flying colours!

I was imagining my Rubenesque mother posing with me for the rape scene!

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So well crafted - and that strategic ending to maybe another story! Hopefully!!!

Wonderfully arousing description without relying on mechanical description of body metrics or a lot of cursing. The playful way each character tries to hide her/his emotion is great!

I loved it! Thank you for writing, and thank you for sharing it.

The story is excellent indeed!

You are a outstanding writer.

Please do one where Giavanna joins in.

and well executed. Questo giudice dice, magnifico! Thanks for sharing your work!

You’ve renewed my appreciation of mother-son sex :)

I hope these three work together again soon!

Hi, I am amazed by the great story you wrote. Do you mind if I translate it into another language and repost? I promise the translation will not be used for any commercial purpose, and the name of the author and the address of this original post will be kept.

Of course you can translate. Thanks for reading and enjoying the story. : )

heyall

Any chance of a sequel?

I wish there was a sequel, but after this much time I'd say no. That's so hot being painted in that position. With his cock mostly in his mom's pussy for that period of time, fucking would need to happen. Who could resist?

Mothers and sons gently pressured by circumstances or peers to cross the lines and engage into more and more illicit acts until they come to realise that while still taboo it is perfectly normal, natural and widespread. That is what I love so much in many of your stories.

what a story ..i was like i am looking the whole thing..infornt of me and feeling every act

Yumm...the picture you paint as she's climbing over his legs to get seated...schiwng!

SO glad she's got a muffin...she's certainly not a co-ed...and would think the entering students would instantly get a big whiff of mom and son't heavenly climax...

I like the reference to Bernini's sculpture "Pluto and Persephone", also referred to as "Pluto and Proserpina" or "The rape of Proserpina". If you ever tried your hand at art it's quite humbling to look at something like this. "Pluto and Persephone" was made in the first half of the 17th century. Look it up and be aware that Bernini couldn't take photos and that it is impossible for the models to hold this pose for longer than a few seconds, if even that. Absolutely astounding peace of artistry, imagination and craftsmanship. Eat your hearts out, Banksys of the world!

I'm sure I could not have held back and not shot my load in such a situation. That's just too much to ask of a fellow.

Very, very nice...and so sensuous...Mom and Son coupling in front of an academic compatriot of Mom's..."for charity"...this was 🔥 Hot, 🔥 Hot, 🔥 Hot...burning up...

You can imply that the relationship carried on later; possibly even including Giavanna, maybe even some of the "Oxford co-eds" Stuart was wanting to peruse...

Your stories are great...infused with emotion, and ❤ caring between the characters...keep up the great works!!

**5**Stars...🌠🌠🌠🌠🌠⚡🌋

Fantastic story!! Thank you...

Loved it, a follow up? ;)

The strokes were gentle like sexual penetration abd the long stoke was s hentle caress…, ah fuck it. Yhat was unfilterred gyckng nindoubt. 👅👅👅👅🔥🔥🔥

Fantastic story. I Love it.

"I tensed hard the moment my mother's pussy seemingly devoured my cock. She lowered herself onto me in a gradual pace. It felt exactly how I expected. Warm. Wet. Inviting. Sure, it hurt sitting on the stool with my mom's weight on me, but the feeling in my cock was pure bliss." You know a young man would not be able to hold off for very long under such circumstances. The intensity, the wetness, throbbing, clenching pulsations of her pussy around his cock would be more than any man could stand. He would shoot quickly. There would be no control. And, oh, that feeling! I remember the first time my hard cockhead touched a young woman's soaking wet pussy lips. I shot a bucketful of cream. There was no control.

Just imagine her pussy with her swollen lips devouring your cock and clenching it so tight that she milks it over and over in rapid succession.

I always enjoy reading your work

About seven years old and still reads like the first time. Wait, this is the first time reading it. I know his mom and Giavanna planned this out, knowing that mother and son would end up fucking. Great story. 5 Stars